ye merii Gazale.n ye merii nazme.n

1600 Posts Completed

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this poem of Faraz dedicated to Sab!

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ye merii Gazale.n ye merii nazme.n tamaam terii hikaayate.n hai.n
ye tazkire.n terii lutf ke hai.n ye sher terii shikaayate.n hai.n
mai.n sub terii nazr kar rahaa huu.N ye un zamaano.n kii s’ate.n hai.n
jo zindagii ke naye safar me.n tujhe kisii roz yaad aaye.N
to ek ek harf jii uThegaa pahan ke anfaas kii qabaaye.N
udaas tanahaa_iiyo.n ke lamho.n me.n naach uThe.ngii ye apasaraaye.N

mujhe terii dard ke alaavaa bhii aur dukh the, ye jaanataa huu.N
hazaar Gam the jo zindagii kii talaash me.n the, ye jaanataa huu.N
mujhe Khabar hai ki terii aa.Nchal me.n dard kii ret chhaanataa huu.N
magar har ek baar tujh ko chhuu kar ye ret rang-e-hinaa banii hai
ye zaKhm gul_zaar ban gaye hai.n ye aahe.n-sozaa.N ghaTaa banii hai
ye dard mauj-e-sabaa huaa hai ye aag dil kii sadaa banii hai

aur ab ye saarii mataa-e-hastii ye phuul ye zaKhm sab tere hai.n
ye dukh ke nauhe ye sukh ke naGme.n jo kal mere the vo ab tere hai.n
jo terii qurbat terii judaa_ii me.n kaT gaye roz-o-shab tere hai.n
vo teraa shaayar teraa muGannii vo jis kii baate.n ajiib sii thii
vo jis ke andaaz Khusro-vaanaa the aur adaaye.N Gariib sii thii.n
vo jis ke jiine kii Khvaahishe.n bhii Khud us ke apane nasiib sii thii.n

na puuchh us kaa ki vo diivaanaa bahut dino.n kaa uja.D chukaa hai
vo kohakan to nahii.n thaa lekin ka.Dii chaTTaano.n se la.D chukaa hai
vo thak chukaa hai aur us kaa teshaa usii ke siine me.n ga.D chukaa hai

Faraz!

[This message has been edited by Amjad Chohan (edited May 29, 2002).]

Tum ik baar muje deewana keh do
tumari baat dunya manti hai

1600 ka hadaff pura karne ki khudhi main mithaye kab khilayain ge chohan mian???/

Mubarak ho Amjad ji aap ko itni dheir sari achi posts ke liay

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Congrats Amjad. Buhat achee nazm dedicate kee hai,magar kis ko hai dedicated specifically?

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BTW Thank you so much

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capo dekha nahi Amjad bahi ne hum ** Sab ** ko ki hia phir be pooch rahya.. keoN Amjad bahi

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wesay Amjad bahi aisay keon

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Amjad bahi

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

kya poem post ki haye amjad jee

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bohat hi dil ko chooh ne wali…

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and congrats on your 1600th post…

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wo poochtay rahay main sunati chali gaye
kholay hay raaz jaise koi raazdaan kay saath

very Nice

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thanko for …

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

**
mubarak hooo Amjad ..

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Allah tumhari posts main or barkat dale .. Ameen !!

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

lol
oh well not for ME
bhai baray taze ho gaye..

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ahan nice choice :slight_smile:

very nice nazam
and thanks for yer dedication

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in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim

Pehle to aap ko bohot bohot mubarik ho

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Aur bohot hi achee nazam hai…

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Hmmm aur capricorn jee aik to aap na…humhesha kohi na kohi baat ya sawaal zaroor karte hai ..poetry main

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… mubarik ho Amjad bhai ..

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.. and thanks for the dedicated nazm … very apt ..

.. wishing you many more good posts …


Make yourself a better person and know who you are before you try and know someone else and expect them to know you…

Tabhee to sawal be-ikhtiaar nikal gaya moon se…aur aap to bas kuch samajhtee heen naheen!

Awwwwwwwww me nikami jo theri samj bhooj hoti tu Nikmai kahay ko hoti

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Khatoon aap zara sabar se kaam lein…hathore maarna achee baat naheen hai. yeh poetry sectionhai yahan nazuk khayalon par bahas hotee hai…law and order create na karein to behtar hoga. Yeh lein

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I know I know,thatswhy clarified..never mind hum hain na explain karne wale

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Amjad Bro…therrrrrrrr

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~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

as usual.. bohot hi umda post

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shayad mujhee tareef karney ki zarorat nahee

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warna sar pe na charh jaey ap

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Thanx Jeera blaid,*kashish* ,NikamiJano ,Capricorn, hanie, chand_chehra, Azam#1, Gemini the Great ,guybrush ,Nayab ,m_isabah ,KinaRa and Nia_Khan ____________________________________ JB aap ko mithai bhi kihilla dain gay, wasay aapuss ki baat hay...yeh koi itna baara marka sur injaam nahi deya

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Capri herr baat thori hee bataai jaati hay

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Nikamii aap nay kuch poocha

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???

bahiiii… hmmmm Ok New Entry …

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Nia Bajiiii shukreya

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