Ye mashq-e-gham-naveesi mera shaoq to nahi hey

Amal · November 10, 2003, 9:05pm

Be’zaari

Ye mashq-e-gham-naveesi mera shaoq to nahi hey
na hi zindagi ka noha mera khaas mashgala hey
par sochta hooN waqt ney mujhey aesa kya dia hey
jisey koi waja bana kar meiN khushi sey jhoom jaaooN
meiN aainoN ke rukh par muskaan apni deikhooN
ya mosamoN ki dhun par koi naghma gun’gunaaooN!
meiN wafoor-e-dard-o-ranj sey jo kuch bhi seekh paaya
wo tajurbaat bechney ko koi dukaan nahi sajaai
ye haadsoN ke qissey to bas yuNhi likh raha hooN
meiN ney kaaghzoN ke ooper koi numaaish nahi lagaai!

---------------------Unrelated-----------------------
Wo teri khud’sari thi ya meri bad’naseebi
ke jo khaab bun ke meiN ney terey naam likh diye the
unhey qabooliat ka saaya jaaney raas kiuN na aaya!
wo mohabbatoN ke rishtey wo inaayatoN ki baateiN
jinhey khuwaahishoN ki rut meiN bas teri lao lagi thi
unhey be’khudhi meiN aa kar tu ney jaaney kya kaha tha
ke merey phool sey jo lafz the wo raakh ban gaey the!
wo dil’lagi thi teri ke tujhey zid si ho gai thi
ke meri chashm-e-muntazir tak wo peghaam kabhi na pohNcha
jissey dhooNtey huwey meiN teri nigaah tak to aaya
par jahaaN mohabbatoN meiN lipta koi nishaan tak na paaya
ye hey usi pal ka qissa jab khaamshi sey hum’dum
teri be’rukhi ki dal’dal meiN har khaab utar gaya tha
meiN waheiN pe mar gaya tha!

By: Amal

La_iba · November 10, 2003, 9:15pm

graet:k:
ap ki shayri hamesha hi bohat umda hoti hai:)

Capricorn · November 10, 2003, 9:17pm

Amal :k:

chand_chehra · November 10, 2003, 10:02pm

Re: Ye mashq-e-gham-naveesi mera shaoq to nahi hey

*Originally posted by Amal: *
Be’zaari

Ye mashq-e-gham-naveesi mera shaoq to nahi hey
na hi zindagi ka noha mera khaas mashgala hey
par sochta hooN waqt ney mujhey aesa kya dia hey
jisey koi waja bana kar meiN khushi sey jhoom jaaooN
meiN aainoN ke rukh par muskaan apni deikhooN
ya mosamoN ki dhun par koi naghma gun’gunaaooN!
meiN wafoor-e-dard-o-ranj sey jo kuch bhi seekh paaya
wo tajurbaat bechney ko koi dukaan nahi sajaai
ye haadsoN ke qissey to bas yuNhi likh raha hooN
meiN ney kaaghzoN ke ooper koi numaaish nahi lagaai!

---------------------Unrelated-----------------------
Wo teri khud’sari thi ya meri bad’naseebi
ke jo khaab bun ke meiN ney terey naam likh diye the
unhey qabooliat ka saaya jaaney raas kiuN na aaya!
wo mohabbatoN ke rishtey wo inaayatoN ki baateiN
jinhey khuwaahishoN ki rut meiN bas teri lao lagi thi
unhey be’khudhi meiN aa kar tu ney jaaney kya kaha tha
ke merey phool sey jo lafz the wo raakh ban gaey the!
wo dil’lagi thi teri ke tujhey zid si ho gai thi
ke meri chashm-e-muntazir tak wo peghaam kabhi na pohNcha
jissey dhooNtey huwey meiN teri nigaah tak to aaya
par jahaaN mohabbatoN meiN lipta koi nishaan tak na paaya
ye hey usi pal ka qissa jab khaamshi sey hum’dum
teri be’rukhi ki dal’dal meiN har khaab utar gaya tha
meiN waheiN pe mar gaya tha!

By: Amal

zabardast :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · November 10, 2003, 10:04pm

Re: Ye mashq-e-gham-naveesi mera shaoq to nahi hey

*Originally posted by Amal: *
Be’zaari

Ye mashq-e-gham-naveesi mera shaoq to nahi hey
na hi zindagi ka noha mera khaas mashgala hey
par sochta hooN waqt ney mujhey aesa kya dia hey
jisey koi waja bana kar meiN khushi sey jhoom jaaooN
meiN aainoN ke rukh par muskaan apni deikhooN
ya mosamoN ki dhun par koi naghma gun’gunaaooN!
meiN wafoor-e-dard-o-ranj sey jo kuch bhi seekh paaya
wo tajurbaat bechney ko koi dukaan nahi sajaai
ye haadsoN ke qissey to bas yuNhi likh raha hooN
meiN ney kaaghzoN ke ooper koi numaaish nahi lagaai!

---------------------Unrelated-----------------------
Wo teri khud’sari thi ya meri bad’naseebi
ke jo khaab bun ke meiN ney terey naam likh diye the
unhey qabooliat ka saaya jaaney raas kiuN na aaya!
wo mohabbatoN ke rishtey wo inaayatoN ki baateiN
jinhey khuwaahishoN ki rut meiN bas teri lao lagi thi
unhey be’khudhi meiN aa kar tu ney jaaney kya kaha tha
ke merey phool sey jo lafz the wo raakh ban gaey the!
wo dil’lagi thi teri ke tujhey zid si ho gai thi
ke meri chashm-e-muntazir tak wo peghaam kabhi na pohNcha
jissey dhooNtey huwey meiN teri nigaah tak to aaya
par jahaaN mohabbatoN meiN lipta koi nishaan tak na paaya
ye hey usi pal ka qissa jab khaamshi sey hum’dum
teri be’rukhi ki dal’dal meiN har khaab utar gaya tha
meiN waheiN pe mar gaya tha!

By: Amal

Pakeeza · November 12, 2003, 10:30am

yeh ooper jis jis nay comment diye hain mujhay zara yeh bataain keh
‘mshq-e-gham-naveesi ka kya matlab hay’
Aap sab ko tou samajh aa gai ho gi

Capricorn · November 12, 2003, 10:47am

An exercise to describe pain

Pakeeza · November 12, 2003, 11:06am

Shukriyaa

NikamiJano · November 12, 2003, 11:23am

Re: Ye mashq-e-gham-naveesi mera shaoq to nahi hey

*Originally posted by Amal: *
Be’zaari

Ye mashq-e-gham-naveesi mera shaoq to nahi hey
na hi zindagi ka noha mera khaas mashgala hey
par sochta hooN waqt ney mujhey aesa kya dia hey
jisey koi waja bana kar meiN khushi sey jhoom jaaooN
meiN aainoN ke rukh par muskaan apni deikhooN
ya mosamoN ki dhun par koi naghma gun’gunaaooN!
meiN wafoor-e-dard-o-ranj sey jo kuch bhi seekh paaya
wo tajurbaat bechney ko koi dukaan nahi sajaai
ye haadsoN ke qissey to bas yuNhi likh raha hooN
meiN ney kaaghzoN ke ooper koi numaaish nahi lagaai!

---------**teRi yaadooN k saa’ey hamiN jeenaY nahi daiteY **-------

Wo teri khud’sari thi ya meri bad’naseebi
ke jo khaab bun ke meiN ney terey naam likh diye the
unhey qabooliat ka saaya jaaney raas kiuN na aaya!
wo mohabbatoN ke rishtey wo inaayatoN ki baateiN
jinhey khuwaahishoN ki rut meiN bas teri lao lagi thi
unhey be’khudhi meiN aa kar tu ney jaaney kya kaha tha
ke merey phool sey jo lafz the wo raakh ban gaey the!
wo dil’lagi thi teri ke tujhey zid si ho gai thi
ke meri chashm-e-muntazir tak wo peghaam kabhi na pohNcha
jissey dhooNtey huwey meiN teri nigaah tak to aaya
par jahaaN mohabbatoN meiN lipta koi nishaan tak na paaya
ye hey usi pal ka qissa jab khaamshi sey hum’dum
teri be’rukhi ki dal’dal meiN har khaab utar gaya tha
meiN waheiN pe mar gaya tha!

Aymal
Beautiful like alwayas specially 2nd one

Amal · November 12, 2003, 11:34am

La'iba bohat bohat shukriya...It's my pleasure....:)

Cap thanx for liking and your explanation:)

CC thanx

Gul aap ko kya huwa?:(

Pakeeza baat kuch palley parri?:)

NikamiJi thanx for liking the poem:)

Daagh · November 12, 2003, 11:41am

excellent stuff Amal

*ye haadsoN ke qissey to bas yuNhi likh raha hooN
meiN ney kaaghzoN ke ooper koi numaaish nahi lagaai!
*

bahot khoob :)

Azad · November 12, 2003, 1:37pm

Khoob :k:

Capricorn · November 12, 2003, 2:22pm

You are welcome :k: Was I right in explaining?

WiseGuy · November 12, 2003, 6:48pm

Nice :k:
BOhat khoob.

system · November 14, 2003, 6:53pm

beautiful.. bohat achi hai :k::k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 14, 2003, 8:46pm

nice1....

cuteepie · November 16, 2003, 1:43am

superb :k:

Sehar · November 16, 2003, 3:47pm

Good as always :-)

Philanthrope · November 17, 2003, 1:39am

Lovely!

Dilsay · November 17, 2003, 2:15pm

Wonderful like always...

Khuda Khush rakhay