Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

pktun September 20, 2011, 12:28am 1

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Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Mujhey Is Se Koi Gila Nahi

Ye To Zindagi Ka Usool Hai
Kabhi Apna Koi Hua Nahi

Ye Jo Silsila Hai Ek Dard Ka
Ye Tohfa Yun Hi Mila Nahi

Tu Jise Jan Kar Bhi Anjan Hai
Wo Raaz Main ne Kaha Nahi

Mujhey Apni Khabar To Hai Magar
Teri Soch Ka Kuch Pata Nahi

Ye Jo Ansoo Hai Meri Ankh Mein
Be’Sabab Hi To Ye Baha Nahi

Ye Sadaa Si Jo Hai Goonjti
Wo Lafz Tu Ne Kaha Nahi

Mera Jurm Hai Meri Sadgi
Meri Aur Koi Khata Nahi…!!
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muddii September 20, 2011, 3:13am 2

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Beautiful:)

khawabRung September 20, 2011, 4:37am 3

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Boht he achi Gazal hay,

Sarsaparilla March 15, 2013, 4:03pm 4

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Good gazal, but the line:

**Tu Jise Jan Kar Bhi Anjan Hai

needs to be changed. It does not follow the rhtym of the rest of the gazal.**

Diva March 15, 2013, 4:43pm 5

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

:k:

tarash March 15, 2013, 4:45pm 6

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

kuch jaldi comments keay hain aap ne

jiia March 15, 2013, 4:46pm 7

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

bari zeadti ki hi DIVA

tarash March 15, 2013, 4:51pm 8

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

sirf ziadti,zulm kia hai diva ne

LP March 15, 2013, 5:12pm 9

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

someone revived it :hinna:
For a second I thought Pktun was back :hinna:

jiia March 15, 2013, 6:26pm 10

Re: Ye Jo Dasht-e-Dard Hai Ishq Ka

read post 7

ME NE BHI EIK PAL KO EAS HI SOCHA jab naam per nazar pari

LP March 15, 2013, 6:27pm 11

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jiia March 15, 2013, 6:42pm 12

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