Pramod
November 23, 2002, 6:26am
1
eik baar phir apnii eik nayii koshish ke saath aap sabon ke saamne haazir hua hooN…aap ke comments ka intezaar rahega…
Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha
Tu ne yuN bhii chhoD jaana tha
Tumne sab kuchh le liya hai naya
HaaN ye rishta bhii to puraana tha
Main cheekh kar bhii kya karta
Tujhe to faislaa sunaanaa tha
Eik baar phir chaDha sach sooli pe
JhooTh ke saath phir zamaana tha
Es dillagii meiN mar gaya hai koii
TumheiN ye baat bas bataana tha
Main yuN bhii tere barabar na tha
Tujhe to jeet hii jaana tha
Baarish huii oosi ke chhaT pe
Jiska miTTii ka thikaana tha
wo hii chaandani se raha mahroom
jo yahaaN chaand ka diwaana tha
ab kyoN baithey ho rone ’ ’
dil zara sonch kar lagaana tha
Bahut khoob !
Thanks for sharing...!
Lamhay
November 23, 2002, 6:33am
3
nice one thanks for sharing!
Re: Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha …
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
eik baar phir apnii eik nayii koshish ke saath aap sabon ke saamne haazir hua hooN…aap ke comments ka intezaar rahega…
Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha
Tu ne yuN bhii chhoD Jaan a tha
Tumne sab kuchh le liya hai naya
HaaN ye rishta bhii to puraana tha
Main cheekh kar bhii kya karta
Tujhe to faislaa sunaanaa tha
Eik baar phir chaDha sach sooli pe
JhooTh ke saath phir zamaana tha
Es dillagii meiN mar gaya hai koii
TumheiN ye baat bas bataana tha
Main yuN bhii tere barabar na tha
Tujhe to jeet hii Jaan a tha
Baarish huii oosi ke chhaT pe
Jiska miTTii ka thikaana tha
wo hii chaandani se raha mahroom
jo yahaaN chaand ka diwaana tha
ab kyoN baithey ho rone ’ ’
dil zara sonch kar lagaana tha
bhut khoob:k:
V nice :k: thanks 4 sharin Pra g…
Pramod
November 23, 2002, 12:48pm
6
honsla afzaai ke liye aap sabon ka bahot bahot shukriya.
very nice :k;
keep up the good work :)
ok ** Teacher** me Pra g kah day ghi
nikii
November 23, 2002, 3:48pm
10
Re: Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha …
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha
Tu ne yuN bhii chhoD jaana tha
Tumne sab kuchh le liya hai naya
HaaN ye rishta bhii to puraana tha
Main cheekh kar bhii kya karta
Tujhe to faislaa sunaanaa tha
Eik baar phir chaDha sach sooli pe
JhooTh ke saath phir zamaana tha
Es dillagii meiN mar gaya hai koii
TumheiN ye baat bas bataana tha
Main yuN bhii tere barabar na tha
Tujhe to jeet hii jaana tha
Baarish huii oosi ke chhaT pe
Jiska miTTii ka thikaana tha
wo hii chaandani se raha mahroom
jo yahaaN chaand ka diwaana tha
ab kyoN baithey ho rone ’ ’
dil zara sonch kar lagaana tha
bhut zaberdast paramod ji :k:
Amal
November 23, 2002, 4:12pm
11
Re: Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha …
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha
Tu ne yuN bhii chhoD jaana tha
Main cheekh kar bhii kya karta
Tujhe to faislaa sunaanaa tha
Eik baar phir chaDha sach sooli pe
JhooTh ke saath phir zamaana tha
wo hii chaandani se raha mahroom
jo yahaaN chaand ka diwaana tha
Bohat khoob Pramod :k:…it’s very nice…thanx for sharing:)
Pramod
November 23, 2002, 5:50pm
12
ghazal pasand karne ke liye aap logon ka bohot bahot shukriya,
Chaand jii, nikami bahna, X_Communist, nikki and amal bhai. ye aap logon kii zaraa navaazii hai warna main kahaaN.....aap logon ki hii honsla afzaai ka sab asar hai ke kuchh likh paataa hooN.....
Re: Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha …
Ye haadsaa to bas bahaana tha
Tu ne yuN bhii chhoD jaana tha
Tumne sab kuchh le liya hai naya
HaaN ye rishta bhii to puraana tha
Main cheekh kar bhii kya karta
Tujhe to faislaa sunaanaa tha
Eik baar phir chaDha sach sooli pe
JhooTh ke saath phir zamaana tha
Es dillagii meiN mar gaya hai koii
TumheiN ye baat bas bataana tha
Main yuN bhii tere barabar na tha
Tujhe to jeet hii jaana tha
Baarish huii oosi ke chhaT pe
Jiska miTTii ka thikaana tha
wo hii chaandani se raha mahroom
jo yahaaN chaand ka diwaana tha
ab kyoN baithey ho rone ’ ’
dil zara sonch kar lagaana tha
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