ye din jo dheere se phisalaa to shaam ke manzar

Koyal · August 23, 2003, 1:52am

*

tere baGair ye ab zindagii kahaaN guzare
qadam qadam pe tere saath kaa gumaN guzare

ye din jo dheere se phisalaa to shaam ke manzar
tere baGair udaasii ke daramiyaaN guzare

vo ashk huuN ki sar-e-raah gir gayaa thaa kabi
uThaa sakaa na koii kitane kaaravaaN guzare

maiN khushk hoke bikhartaa rahaa huu pairoN meiN
bahut zamaanaa huaa mujh pe kashtiyaaN guzare

ye baat ab bhii nahiN hai kisii se kahane ki
tamaam sajde tere dar se raayagaaN guzare
*

ullujii · August 23, 2003, 2:01am

la-jawab

ps: tere badan kaa aalaa_o ho merii saa.Nso.n me.n
kabhii vo lamhaa bhii ik baar jaan-e-jaa.N guzare

ullujii · August 23, 2003, 2:06am

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Koyal · August 23, 2003, 2:16am

thanks but ye sher ap k pass kahan se aia

Koyal · August 23, 2003, 2:17am

system · August 23, 2003, 5:45am

:k:

Capricorn · August 23, 2003, 6:52am

:k:

Daagh · August 23, 2003, 3:59pm

Re: ye din jo dheere se phisalaa to shaam ke manzar

mashallah bahot khoob

yeh ek sher

ye sara jism jhuk kar bojh se duhra hua hoga
main sajde mein nahin tha aap ko dhoka hua hoga

WiseGuy · August 23, 2003, 4:00pm

Bohat khoob…

:k:

chand_chehra · August 23, 2003, 4:21pm

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bohat khoob :k:

ullujii · August 23, 2003, 8:03pm

ik murghi nay deya hai :love:

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 23, 2003, 9:14pm

bohut khoob!:k::k:

Capricorn · August 23, 2003, 9:57pm

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Nice selection :k:

Koyal · August 24, 2003, 12:52am

aj kal ki murghi sahi se anday tu daiti nahi ap ko sher kesay day ghi aur poetry forum hai ye poltry farm nahi hi jo anday murghi ki batin kar rahay acha..*baap ray bagho before koyal ban ho **

Koyal · August 24, 2003, 5:29pm

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:k: nice sher ab is sher ka jawab baad main day ghi and thanks

Koyal · August 24, 2003, 5:30pm

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thanks capri..

PS: ap zinda ho na

Capricorn · August 24, 2003, 5:36pm

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

thanks capri..:)

PS: ap zinda ho na :p
[/QUOTE]

Jee haan abhee to hoon kia kareeiye ga :D

Koyal · August 24, 2003, 5:38pm

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ch ch me asiay he khush ho rehi thei :p..jis ka tha dar wohi nahi gs per b jo chahay so kar but:smack: phooti kismat

Capricorn · August 24, 2003, 5:42pm

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:halo:

Koyal · August 24, 2003, 5:51pm

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sar keon chakra gaya any way nice to see u after long tame me leaving now ..