Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity September 24, 2007, 5:26am 1

Aik Ghazal,

Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai
Thakan Se Chuur Kion Honay Laga Hai

Main Uss Ko Chahta Hoon Jee Se Lekin
Wo Mujh Se Duur Kion Honay Laga Hai

Wafa Ke Ehed Kerna, Dilon Ko Torr Dena
Khel Ye Mash’hoor Kion Honay Laga Hai

Main Aksar Sochta Hoon Ke Ehd-e-Rawaan Main
Dagha Manshoor Kion Honay Laga Hai

(Ahmer; September 21, 2007)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi,

Regards,

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SJ September 24, 2007, 7:41am 2

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

wel ....taza kalam lag raha hai:)
bohat khobsorat kalam hai....
really nice

redidentity September 24, 2007, 7:49am 3

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

jee sonia garam garam sa hai.. was written on 21 sept :)

thnx for liking :$

bheegiyaad September 24, 2007, 8:38am 4

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

very nice:)

Shumaisa September 24, 2007, 8:44am 5

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

woww Ahmer..
Jab aap mashoo’r ho jaao tou mujhe autograph dayna na bhoolna..

fizatiq September 24, 2007, 11:46am 6

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

buhat zabardast.......................mugh ko kab aiysa likhna aayay ga....

chacha_Ghalib September 24, 2007, 6:15pm 7

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

khoob :k:

redidentity September 25, 2007, 4:41am 8

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

Thnx alot bheegiyaad, Shumaisa, fiza n chacha_ghalib..

thnx alot.. :)

tum_bin_1 September 25, 2007, 4:45pm 9

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai
Thakan Se Chuur Kion Honay Laga Hai

Main Uss Ko Chahta Hoon Jee Se Lekin
Wo Mujh Se Duur Kion Honay Laga Hai

**Aap to bohat acha likhtay hain **
Very nice

Sheal September 25, 2007, 9:55pm 10

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

shumaisa sis abhi lay lo autograph aisa na ho ahmer mashoor ho ker humain bhool hi jain

nice stuff Ahmer :k:

Aliyish September 25, 2007, 10:22pm 11

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

Main Uss Ko Chahta Hoon Jee Se Lekin
Wo Mujh Se Duur Kion Honay Laga Hai

:) nice

redidentity September 26, 2007, 4:04am 12

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

thnx alot tum_bin, Sheal n aliyish :)

@ Sheal.. main kisi ko itni aasaani se nahi bhoolta :) aap kahan ghayeb rehti hain?

*~~*~~*Prom Night Competition*~~*~~*

AQ October 1, 2007, 4:27am 13

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

apni kitaab mujhaY tohfaY maiN zaroor denaa :)

redidentity October 1, 2007, 4:30am 14

Re: Ye Dil Majbuur Kion Honay Laga Hai..

haww.. sach batayen.. yehi ghazal to mujhe sab se zada pasand thee..

aap meri book ki proof reading ker dejay

thnx alot