Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

Pramod · September 5, 2002, 12:25pm

Eik naye jazbaat ke saath kuchh koshish ki hai…your comments will be highly appriciated…

YuN to khubsoorat, ye jahaaN, saraa lage hameiN
Eik hi gul par gulsitaaN meiN piyaraa lage hameiN

Mujhko tou amaavas se dosti hai, kiyoNki
Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

Naakhuda se hamne khaai hai choT aaise
Saahil ke rubroo bhi, door kinaara lage hameiN

Kahte haiN waqt-e-marg sab eik sa lage
Aaz har eik chehara, tumhaara lage hameiN

Waise to hum bhi jaante haiN, " " ko lekin
Andaaz-e-bayaaN to hai, par taqdeer ka maara lage hameiN

chand_chehra · September 5, 2002, 3:28pm

very nice :)

thanko for sharing :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 5, 2002, 4:18pm

:k:

wah g wah… keep it up!

SaaHiL_Kinaara · September 5, 2002, 5:43pm

wah! kya baat hai! :k:

kaash mujhe bhi sher kehna aa jayen!

NikamiJano · September 5, 2002, 9:03pm

Re: Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *
Eik naye jazbaat ke saath kuchh koshish ki hai....your comments will be highly appriciated....

(Allah reham karey new jazbaat)....:)

Naakhuda se hamne khaai hai choT aaise
Saahil ke rubroo bhi, door kinaara lage hameiN

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nice one Pra g thanks 4 sharin

SunnyBoy · September 6, 2002, 1:58am

buhat khoob :k:

Pramod · September 6, 2002, 6:32am

zarra nawaazi ke liye shukriya, Chaand ji, HeArT HaCKeR,SaaHiL,and SunnyBoy.
Thanks a lot.

Pramod · September 6, 2002, 6:40am

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

nice one Pra g thanks 4 sharin
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Shukriya Bahna, meri koshih ko saraahne ke liye.
THANX.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 6, 2002, 7:29am

Re: Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
Eik naye jazbaat ke saath kuchh koshish ki hai....your comments will be highly appriciated....

YuN to khubsoorat, ye jahaaN, saraa lage hameiN
Eik hi gul par gulsitaaN meiN piyaraa lage hameiN

Mujhko tou amaavas se dosti hai, kiyoNki
Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

Naakhuda se hamne khaai hai choT aaise
Saahil ke rubroo bhi, door kinaara lage hameiN

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Nice, Thanks for shring, Gul ka Zikr bhi ho geya poetry meiN :p
pehle jo post ki thi wuh humain Zeyda Pasand aai thi:~)

Pramod · September 6, 2002, 9:41am

Re: Re: Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

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*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

Nice, Thanks for shring, Gul ka Zikr bhi ho geya poetry meiN :p
pehle jo post ki thi wuh humain Zeyda Pasand aai thi:~)
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Shukriya GuL-e-Tasbeeh ji. Aap ne hamaare jazbaatoN ko pasand kiya. ab har pal ke jazbaat eik jiase to hote nahin haiN..esi liye hamesha eik jaisa nahin likh paataa. phir bhii hamaara likha aap ko pasand aaya ye hi bahot hai hamaare liye. waise main koshish karoonga ke hamesha hamaara likha aap ko pahle se ziyaada pasand aaye...

arey Haan ! Gul kazikra bhi ho gaya..bas yun hi...

thanks once again.

Sehar · September 6, 2002, 9:51am

Very nice Pramod :)

Pramod · September 9, 2002, 7:15am

Shukriya, Sehar.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 9, 2002, 8:21am

Re: Re: Re: Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *

Shukriya GuL-e-Tasbeeh ji. Aap ne hamaare jazbaatoN ko pasand kiya. ab har pal ke jazbaat eik jiase to hote nahin haiN..esi liye hamesha eik jaisa nahin likh paataa. phir bhii hamaara likha aap ko pasand aaya ye hi bahot hai hamaare liye. waise main koshish karoonga ke hamesha hamaara likha aap ko pahle se ziyaada pasand aaye...

arey Haan ! Gul kazikra bhi ho gaya..bas yun hi...

thanks once again.
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App nay Bilkul sahi farmayaa humesha ek say Jazbaat nahin hotay,
aur har ek kay liye mumkin bhi nahin wuh apne jazbaat ko paper peh Utaar sakay, issliye app khush ho jaaiye that u can:)
aur GuL ka zikar to shaaairi me na ho ga to kahan hoga:)
well once again Nice poetry and Koshish jaari rakhiye Allah appke work me barkat daalay ga ameen
Best wishes for you!

Pramod · September 9, 2002, 12:38pm

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

App nay Bilkul sahi farmayaa humesha ek say Jazbaat nahin hotay,
aur har ek kay liye mumkin bhi nahin wuh apne jazbaat ko paper peh Utaar sakay, issliye app khush ho jaaiye that u can:)
aur GuL ka zikar to shaaairi me na ho ga to kahan hoga:)
well once again Nice poetry and Koshish jaari rakhiye Allah appke work me barkat daalay ga ameen
Best wishes for you!
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ThanX a lot, Gul.

Farhina · September 9, 2002, 12:40pm

Re: Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

YuN to khubsoorat, ye jahaaN, saraa lage hameiN
Eik hi gul par gulsitaaN meiN piyaraa lage hameiN

Mujhko tou amaavas se dosti hai, kiyoNki
Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

Pramod · September 10, 2002, 6:32am

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*Originally posted by Farhina: *
YuN to khubsoorat, ye jahaaN, saraa lage hameiN
Eik hi gul par gulsitaaN meiN piyaraa lage hameiN

Mujhko tou amaavas se dosti hai, kiyoNki
Ye chaand eik magroor sitaara lage hameiN

Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for liking Farhina.

hanie · September 10, 2002, 7:34am

Waise to hum bhi jaante haiN, " " ko lekin
Andaaz-e-bayaaN to hai, par taqdeer ka maara lage hameiN

wah kya baat haye...
zabardast...

very nicely done pramod Jee.. :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 10, 2002, 9:01am

bhaie

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boht achie hei

Pramod · September 10, 2002, 10:17am

Shukriya Hanie and Masoom.