Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga!

Amal · August 15, 2003, 7:10pm

Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga! kisi roz yuNhi zid meiN aa kar na raat dhaley to kya ho ga!

tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi
tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga!

yahaN har koi mujh sey kehta hey tujhey hargiz bhi na sochooN meiN
par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

teri chaahat ki saari shammeiN meiN ney ik ik kar ke bujha di heiN
gar phir bhi dil ke dareechoN par koi deep jaley to kya ho ga

terey saamney be’khud ho jaooN yehi soch ke meiN to darta hooN
koi aesa lamha paagal sa aa kar na taley to kya ho ga!

meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN aakhaast ki neeli basti meiN
tera taara merey taarey sey agar aan miley to kya ho ga!

By: Amal

chodhry · August 15, 2003, 7:22pm

Re: Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi
tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga!

yahaN har koi mujh sey kehta hey tujhey hargiz bhi na sochooN meiN
par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

*teri chaahat ki saari shammeiN meiN ney ik ik kar ke bujha di heiN
gar phir bhi dil ke dareechoN par koi deep jaley to kya ho ga *

terey saamney be'khud ho jaooN yehi soch ke meiN to darta hooN
koi aesa lamha paagal sa aa kar na taley to kya ho ga!

meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN aakhaast ki neeli basti meiN
tera taara merey taarey sey agar aan miley to kya ho ga!

By: Amal
[/QUOTE]

bohat acha amal jee...

Amarbail1 · August 15, 2003, 7:24pm

teri chaahat ki saari shammeiN meiN ney ik ik kar ke bujha di heiN
gar phir bhi dil ke dareechoN par koi deep jaley to kya ho ga

meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN aakaash ki neeli basti meiN
tera taara merey taarey sey agar aan miley to kya ho ga!

Thanks for sharing Amal another masterpiece... Nice to see you back again, alhtough this break was a bit long ...

However, I still await your reply towards the query I asked in pmsg... hope you still remember ...

baziger · August 15, 2003, 7:25pm

wah… bhut he khoob.:k:

KinaRa · August 15, 2003, 8:01pm

wesay tu sari gazal he achi hia but ye sher zabardast hia
lagta hia kinaRa k taste ka hia

tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga! :)

_Passionate · August 15, 2003, 8:11pm

teri chaahat ki saari shammeiN meiN ney ik ik kar ke bujha di heiN
gar phir bhi dil ke dareechoN par koi deep jaley to kya ho ga

*sigh

zabardast …:k:

Pramod · August 15, 2003, 9:59pm

hamesha kii tarah eik kuchh different soNch aur jazbaat...
It is good one ** Amal Sahab **

tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi
tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga!

ye aur akhiri sher mujhe behad achhe lage...

daad kubul kijiye......

XkanwalX · August 15, 2003, 10:17pm

Wow.. Bohat khoob.. baar baar perhney ko dil kerta hai :).. U are really very talented.. u should publish a book or something.. seriously..

Really nice.. :k:

system · August 15, 2003, 10:55pm

Re: Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga!

Wonderfull…:k: Aap bahut acha likhte hain…I agree with kanwal about publishing a book…

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · August 15, 2003, 11:48pm

true :k:

Great amal

chand_chehra · August 16, 2003, 12:08am

Re: Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga!

bohat bohat bohat khubsurat :k:

nikii · August 16, 2003, 11:30am

Re: Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

teri chaahat ki saari shammeiN meiN ney ik ik kar ke bujha di heiN
gar phir bhi dil ke dareechoN par koi deep jaley to kya ho ga

terey saamney be'khud ho jaooN yehi soch ke meiN to darta hooN
koi aesa lamha paagal sa aa kar na taley to kya ho ga!

meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN aakhaast ki neeli basti meiN
tera taara merey taarey sey agar aan miley to kya ho ga!

By: Amal
[/QUOTE]

hamesha ki tarah zaberdast lajawab :)

ASA · August 16, 2003, 12:08pm

wah… kya kehnay… bouhat khoob… :k:

Muslim_Queen · August 16, 2003, 1:19pm

Amal your poems are never anything -but beautiful.Thank you for sharing.

Khanzada · August 16, 2003, 1:52pm

Partner…aap to artist loug ho..aik dam best he likh di hai :k:

TajMahal · August 16, 2003, 5:50pm

excellent superb !

jasmeen · August 16, 2003, 6:32pm

wahh amal jee app ki is shaeree say kuch baghawat ki boo see atee hay;) kherr bohtt achee ghazal hayy no doubt:flower1:

Koyal · August 16, 2003, 9:51pm

Re: Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga!

nice one ye kahin koyal k leay tu nahi likhay ap ne 2 sher

cuteepie · August 17, 2003, 2:21am

:k:

aadhoorighazal · August 17, 2003, 3:05am

Re: Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga!

terey saamney be'khud ho jaooN yehi soch ke meiN to darta hooN
koi aesa lamha paagal sa aa kar na taley to kya ho ga!

Loved this one........................thanks Amal.