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Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…

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nice amall bhai image aur ashaar

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bohaat kHoob aap bhihmaari saff meiN shaamil hogaye maghar waah keya Shaan hai kiss andaaz se img-posting shuru ki hai keep it up ..Img ke saath aahsaar ki hausn aur ashaar keh saath img ka husn dobaala hojaata hai

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wowwwwwwwwwww Amal zabardast post bohat he khoobsurat img and sher..thanks 4 sharing baheiN ashk kioN tumhaare inheiN rok lo kHudaara mujhe dukh Qabool saare yeh sitam nahiN gawaara

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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very nice Amal ji :)

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Masha'Allah very Nice Amal jee.
Like your way of style:) keep it up and thanks for sharing

~DuniyaaN ki Mehfilon se ukta geya huun Ya-Rab
kya Lutf anjuman ka jab DiL hi bujh geya ho~
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~kya Nazar dain jo koi Naie ArZoO karain
DiL mey tou Tootne kie bhie Himmat nahin rahi~

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wowwww beautiful img + shair

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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very nice Amal bhai
keep it up......

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Bahur khoob Amal

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wasay mughay sirf shair hee acha luga hay

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u know fre world, choice apni apni

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Buhat khoob

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Owner of Mehkama-e-Sharafat
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nice ashaar Amal

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aik baat zehan mein aarahi hai…thora sa criticize kar rahi hoon..bura na manaye ga.
mera khayal hai ke last line mein dhabbay ki jagah agar “daag” use kia jaye to ziyada theek rahay ga…thora adbi lafz lagta hai daag

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once again very nice work

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~It hurts to love someone and not to be loved in return, But what is more painful is to love someone and never find the courage to let that person know how you feel.~

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I am Speechless just amazing img and Poetry

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Bohot khoob

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Nice Amal jee

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its superb, amal jee

no words…
eek dam

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Amal
Bohat khooB

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Beautiful.

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wow Amal jee… kochh daagh parmanent hotey haiN, kabhi ghaib naheen ho patey …

btw: waisey apas ki baat kitni baar aap ko apney bheegey howey shaney ko sukhana parha

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[This message has been edited by Rameesha (edited July 30, 2002).]

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Thanx everybody for making my first image post so memorable

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…

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yr welcome any time

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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**
Masha Allah

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

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very nice…great effort

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