Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

redidentity · June 18, 2009, 3:20pm

Aik poem,

Kuch Yaadain hain Unn lamhon ki
Jinn lamhon mein hum saath rahay..
Khushiyon se bharay jazbaat rahay

Aik umrr guzaari hai hum ne..
Jahan rotay hooway bhi hanstay they
kuch kehtay they , kuch suntay they
Hum roz subha jab miltay they
Tou sab ke chehray khiltay they

Purr-lutf woh manzer hota tha
Sab mill kar baatain kartay they
Hum socho kitna hanstay they..

Woh goonj humaray hansne ki
Ab aik puraani yaad banni..
yeh batain hain unn lamhon ki
Jinn lamhon mein hum saath rahay

muncho · June 18, 2009, 3:35pm

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

waah g sahi farmaya; yaadein rah jaati hain, kuch chotee chotee baatein rah jaati haingee!!
sawal ye hey k memory ko format kia ja sakna chahiyaa.

_MuNiYa · June 18, 2009, 3:42pm

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

Awww reminds me of my school days

redidentity · June 18, 2009, 3:54pm

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

muncho g, aap ne sahi farmaya.. magar ye to aisi yadain haina jinhain hum kabhi delete nahi kerna chahtay..

as mentioned by Muniya, hamaray school ki batain.. i still remember those school days when we used to be so playful, apni dhun main magan..

i miss my past..

mery bichhron ko mujh se mila de koi
mera bachpan kisi mol la day koi

meray bachpan ke din
kitnay achay thay din
aaj bethay bithaye kion yaad agaye..

:(

Daanie · June 18, 2009, 7:29pm

wonderful :)

redidentity · June 19, 2009, 1:44pm

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

thanks Daanie.. :)

terray_naam · June 19, 2009, 4:37pm

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

Woh goonj humaray hansne ki
Ab aik puraani yaad banni..
yeh batain hain unn lamhon ki
Jinn lamhon mein hum saath rahay

zabardast yaaden hoti hi aisi hen

Shab-e-Hijar · June 19, 2009, 5:22pm

very nice :k:

saqijani · June 19, 2009, 6:32pm

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

very nice

Ahmi · June 20, 2009, 4:27am

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

Nice red jee...

redidentity · June 20, 2009, 5:09am

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

thanks alot :)

being_lonely · June 20, 2009, 7:29am

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

This nazm make me sad Ahmer :( btw nice sharing !

redidentity · June 20, 2009, 12:55pm

Re: Ye Batain Hain Unn Lamhon Ki..

SiD keep smiling..

life gives us many reasons to smile as well if it gives us some reasons to cry for..

khush raho..

thanks alot