Ye Barishian

IS · January 7, 2011, 8:16pm

*Ye Barishian

Yeh Barishian bhi tum si hain,
Jo baras gai to Bahar hain,
Jo theher gai to Qarar hain,
Kabhi aa gai yunhi besabad,
Kabhi chaa gai yunhi roz-o-shab,
Kabhi shor hain,
Kabhi chup si hain,
Yeh Barishian bhi tum si hain,

Kisi yaad main kisi raat ko,
Ik dabi howi si raakh ko,
Kabhi youn howa k bujha diya,
Kabhi khud se khud ko jala diya,
Kahin boond boond main ghum si hain,
Yeh Barishian bhi tum si hain…!
*

Amarbail · January 7, 2011, 8:35pm

Re: Ye Barishian

Bahut lajawaab intikhaab hai …:k:

Although kuch errors hain, which needs to be corrected …

Like …

Kabhi aa gai yunhi besabab
Kabhi shor hain

IS · January 7, 2011, 8:45pm

Re: Ye Barishian

thanks for correction
typing mistake
wo cell fone se daikh k type kr raha tha na is laiye

Amarbail · January 7, 2011, 8:47pm

Re: Ye Barishian

No worries ... :)
Hope you have not mind me pointing out the errors ... !

IS · January 7, 2011, 8:54pm

Re: Ye Barishian

is mai mind karne wali kon si baat hay ji
main tu aap ka sukar guzaar hon :-)

Amarbail · January 7, 2011, 8:55pm

Re: Ye Barishian

Shukar-guzaar ... :)

Aisi koi baat nahe IS, I like your contribution, achi poetries share karte raha karain !!!

IS · January 7, 2011, 8:58pm

Re: Ye Barishian

i always try to post/share gud poetry

Amal · January 8, 2011, 1:34pm

Re: Ye Barishian

We know your taste is very good k:

UZ · January 10, 2011, 5:40am

Re: Ye Barishian

IS bhai very nice indeed:k:

Shab-e-Hijar · January 10, 2011, 6:06am

Re: Ye Barishian

very nice :k:

pktun · January 11, 2011, 9:49am

Re: Ye Barishian

V nyc :k: