Ye azaar haasil e ishq hai, ab bach sakuN ye dua na de

Pramod · May 25, 2004, 8:46pm

Bahot dino ke baad kuchh likha hai..soncha aap logoN ko bhii suna dooN..

Mere chaaraagar,ye ehsaan kar, mere dard kii dava na de
Ye azaar haasil e ishq hai, ab bach sakuN ye dua na de

Sab zakhm puraane ho gaye, koi sitam naya izaad karo
Dar hai kaheeN mera jabt e gham tera hoNsla hila na de

Aie aarzooN, aie hasratoN , karo oos chaman kii justajoo
JahaaN rivaayatoN kii aaNdhiyaaN kisi phool ko dara na de

Yehii soNch ke hii maiN kabhee na haal e dil suna sakaa
Meri umar bhar kii tishnagii eik pal meiN wo bujha na de

Apnii hathelii ko esi waaste oos ne dekha nahiN ab talak
Koii lakeer mere haq meiN kaheeN koii faisla suna na de

By Pramod

Dasht-o-Sehra · May 26, 2004, 12:47pm

very nice :k:

koiDost · May 26, 2004, 8:44pm

Kyaa khuub ghazal sunaa'ii hai, saahab, Waa..h!
Tah.e.dil se naachiiz ki daad qubuul fermmaa_iye :)

Koyal · May 26, 2004, 9:24pm

v nice thanks for sharing with us ...:)

Pramod · May 27, 2004, 2:56pm

Ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai ke liye aap logoN ka bahot bahot shukriya ** Dasht-o-Sehra, Dost and Koyal **.

chodhry · May 28, 2004, 5:22am

Re: Ye azaar haasil e ishq hai, ab bach sakuN ye dua na de

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
Bahot dino ke baad kuchh likha hai..soncha aap logoN ko bhii suna dooN..

Yehii soNch ke hii maiN kabhee na haal e dil suna sakaa
Meri umar bhar kii tishnagii eik pal meiN wo bujha na de

Apnii hathelii ko esi waaste oos ne dekha nahiN ab talak
Koii lakeer mere haq meiN kaheeN koii faisla suna na de

By Pramod
[/QUOTE]

bohat alla, beautiful :)

especially the bold line. what a thought man! :) keep ur imagination flying...

Pramod · May 28, 2004, 3:13pm

Re: Re: Ye azaar haasil e ishq hai, ab bach sakuN ye dua na de

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *

bohat alla, beautiful :)

especially the bold line. what a thought man! :) keep ur imagination flying...
[/QUOTE]

zarra navaazii ke liye bahot bahot shukriya chodhry sahab.

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 29, 2004, 10:08am

*Apnii hathelii ko esi waaste oos ne dekha nahiN ab talak
Koii lakeer mere haq meiN kaheeN koii faisla suna na de
*

Boht zabar10 shair hai infact poorii ghazal hee boht achii likhii hai ap ne Pramod bhai.. Keep writing and keep sharing..

Pramod · May 30, 2004, 4:07am

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya ** HeArT HaCKeR sahiba **. aap logon ke ye alfaaz bahot door tak mera honsla baDhaaeiNge es safar meiN..
shukriya…

Daagh · May 30, 2004, 11:04pm

very nice Pramod bhai…bahot khoob

keep sharing mate

Confused_Guy · May 31, 2004, 12:06am

:k: beautiful yaar..

keep up teh good work yaar.. very nicely written…

baray zabardast meanings chuppay huwaya hain is main.. :k:

very nice..

Azad · May 31, 2004, 7:50am

khoob

Pramod · May 31, 2004, 8:28pm

Ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai karne ke liye bahot bahot sukriya
** Daagh jii, Confused Gadha and Azad **

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 31, 2004, 8:41pm

Pramod bhaiyyaa ab aap baQii ki bhee sarii ghazals aur poemz yahan post kerien.. ..

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 1, 2004, 12:42am

two thumbz up:flower1:

AQ · June 1, 2004, 1:04am

Apnii hathelii ko esi waaste oos ne dekha nahiN ab talak
Koii lakeer mere haq meiN kaheeN koii faisla suna na de

great stuff :)

Pramod · June 1, 2004, 4:57pm

Karenge Bahna..jab bhii likhenge aap logon to zaroor sunaaeNge. Aap logon ke lafzoN se bahot honsla afzaai hoti hai tabhii to aage likh paate haiN…
I will come with something new again…just wait…

Pramod · June 1, 2004, 7:28pm

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya ** GKK and Anwaar Qureshi
sahab **.

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 1, 2004, 9:04pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

Karenge Bahna..jab bhii likhenge aap logon to zaroor sunaaeNge. Aap logon ke lafzoN se bahot honsla afzaai hoti hai tabhii to aage likh paate haiN...
I will come with something new again....just wait...
[/QUOTE]

jaldii kereeye ga na

hum wait ker rahay hein.. :)