ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

sunny_nicky September 25, 2006, 8:05pm 1

ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye
vo but hai yaa Khuda dekha na jaaye

ye kin nazaron se tum ne aaj dekha
ke teraa dekhana dekha na jaaye

hamesha ke liye mujh se bichha.D ja
ye manzar baaraha dekha na jaaye

Galat hai jo suna par aazama kar
tujhe ai baavafa dekha na jaaye

ye maharuumii nahiee paas-e-vafa hai
ko_ii tere sivaa dekhaa na jaaye

yahii to aashna banate hai.n aaKhir
ko_ii naa_aashna dekha na jaaye

‘Faraz’ apane siva hai kaun tera
tujhe tujh se juda dekha na jaye

Ehsass September 25, 2006, 8:08pm 2

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

nice sunny ji ,its my fav

sunny_nicky September 25, 2006, 8:10pm 3

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

thx ehsaaasss

mahamkhan September 26, 2006, 8:30am 4

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

niceeeee

Cograts Little Princess

sunny_nicky September 26, 2006, 7:34pm 5

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

thx mahamm gee

sour_candy September 26, 2006, 9:18pm 6

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its really beautiful piece of poetry,u really have very good taste,keep it up.

ShreyaGhoshal September 26, 2006, 9:20pm 7

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buht achey dosyt

sunny_nicky September 28, 2006, 3:19am 8

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thx both of uu

Sannan September 28, 2006, 6:49am 9

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Yaar u r very senior person here and i think u better know that too much nice poetry at one instant lost its taste ..... telling you honestly that whenever i see poetry section and too much post from one person in a day then avoid those posts and give concentration on the person who is sending only one post in a day or week but cool one
......

No offense as its sincere suggestion just to make your post prominent

sunny_nicky September 28, 2006, 11:39am 10

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

ok man khush raho hum tu yehi chahtay hai ok tc

Sannan September 29, 2006, 1:29am 11

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

Shukaria janab

sunny_nicky September 29, 2006, 2:19am 12

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

thx 4 wht yaaarr

IS September 29, 2006, 4:57am 13

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
ab say per week aik post karnay ka azam karnay wala icon

IS September 29, 2006, 4:58am 14

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

Faraz ke kia baat hay

sunny_nicky September 29, 2006, 9:16pm 15

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

yeh tu manna prega gee

SinlneR September 30, 2006, 8:36am 16

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

nice, read it after a long time. stil feels good..

sunny_nicky September 30, 2006, 2:16pm 17

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thx

Prince_Ali September 30, 2006, 4:18pm 18

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:k:

sunny_nicky October 1, 2006, 2:29am 19

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

thx prince geee

kaleemhk October 4, 2006, 11:29am 20

Re: ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaaye

Very nice .............:)