yakeeN ki bebasi dekho to........

Pramod · July 18, 2003, 7:29pm

Rahbar rahzan ho jaaye , yakeeN ki bebasi dekho to
Naakhuda dubo dey kasti ko, mauzoN ki dillagi dekho to

Tum mere nahiN ho maloom hai, maiN bhi aur kisi ka hooN
Phir bhi tumhiN ko chahey hai, ye dil ki khudkushi dekho to

kadmoN tale tere kaliaN hoN, har khar palak se chun lenge
Hum saada dil haiN jaaneman, hamaaree bandagi dekho to

Maykhaane se tauba kar lee, saaki se tark – e - wafa kiya
Dagmagaaye aadatan ab bhi kadam, ye bhi maykashi dekho to

Naaseh kahe kaafir haiN hum , kufra hai ye butparasti meri
Tum kadam rakho, maiN sizdaN karooN, hud-e-bekhudi dekho to

intehaa e Intazaar hai shaayad, shaam kaasid se ulajh gaya
Ye gila nahiN phir bhi ae sanam, tum apani berukhi dekho to

Kuchh log zameeN pe aaye the, jo ishq ko mazhab kahte the
Wo fana huye the ishq ki khaatir, oonaki aashaqi dekho to.

Wo nahiN hain meri lakiroN meiN, ye baat kahi mere maazi ne
Bazicha - e - zist meiN yaaroN zara , taqdeer ki baazi dekho to

Tum kyoN achhe lage oose, wo yun bhi khub maze meiN tha
Ab jeeta hai na marta hai , ‘pramod’ ki zindagee dekho to.

By Pramod

Dilsay · July 18, 2003, 7:47pm

very nice

chand_chehra · July 18, 2003, 9:05pm

very nice pramod gi :k:
keep it up

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 19, 2003, 12:23am

lajavab:k::k:
keep it up:flower1:

Muslim_Queen · July 19, 2003, 1:54am

very beautiful.......

NikamiJano · July 19, 2003, 3:26am

[quote]
tum mere nahiN ho maloom hai maiN bhi aur kisi ka hooN
Phir bhi tumhiN ko chahey hai, ye dil ki khudkushi dekho to

kadmoN tale tere kaliaN hoN, har khar palak se chun lenge
Hum saada dil haiN jaaneman, hamaaree bandagi dekho to

[/quote]

v nice Pra g thanks 4 sharin...:)

Amarbail1 · July 19, 2003, 6:41pm

Bahut khoobsurat and touchy …:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 19, 2003, 6:55pm

boht achay bhaiyya :)

waisay agr abhi ap "pramod" likhne k bajay apna real name likh daitay tu acha nahi tha kia?? ;)

Prince_Ali · July 19, 2003, 8:13pm

:k:
thanks for sharing

Dj_Aqua · July 19, 2003, 8:48pm

:k:

Pramod · July 20, 2003, 3:05pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
boht achay bhaiyya :)

waisay agr abhi ap "pramod" likhne k bajay apna real name likh daitay tu acha nahi tha kia?? ;)
[/QUOTE]

Unfortunately, Pramod is my real name, my friend....

Pramod · July 20, 2003, 3:08pm

ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai karne ke liye aap sabhii ka bahot bahot shukriya
** Dilsay, chand jii, GKK, M Queen,Nikami bahna,Amarbail,Prince Ali and Dj **.

ASA · July 20, 2003, 3:22pm

bouhat khoob… :k:

Amal · July 20, 2003, 7:14pm

Re: yakeeN ki bebasi dekho to…

Pramod bhai achi koshish hey:k: but now you are good enough for us to expect from you something more better than this. And am sure something great is on its way:) We are waiting:)

Pramod · July 21, 2003, 12:29am

thanks ASA.

I will try my best ** Amal ** sahab. Thanks for your words anyway...!

Capricorn · July 21, 2003, 6:37am

Khoobsurat :k:

Pramod · July 22, 2003, 2:03pm

Ghazal pasand karne ke liye shukriya, Capricorn.

chodhry · July 22, 2003, 2:16pm

Re: yakeeN ki bebasi dekho to........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

Tum mere nahiN ho maloom hai, maiN bhi aur kisi ka hooN
Phir bhi tumhiN ko chahey hai, ye dil ki khudkushi dekho to

Tum kyoN achhe lage oose, wo yun bhi khub maze meiN tha
Ab jeeta hai na marta hai , ‘pramod’ ki zindagee dekho to.

By Pramod
[/QUOTE]

I just loved it. thank you Pramod, its really nice.

Pramod · July 22, 2003, 10:17pm

Re: Re: yakeeN ki bebasi dekho to........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *

I just loved it. thank you Pramod, its really nice.
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Shukriya for your Love, chodhry sahab.

chodhry · July 24, 2003, 5:27pm

Re: Re: Re: yakeeN ki bebasi dekho to........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

Shukriya for your Love, chodhry sahab.
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Pramod u know wt mughey yeh do sher inney achey laggye hein key i come to this thread on n off, just to read them. do let me know when ever u post anything.