Yai Kesi Mushkil Hai?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Haan wo lamhai mushkil tha
Mujj pai bhi or tum pai bhi
Main jantain hoon magar
In mushkil rastoon ko asan banana
Merai baas main tha
Main kiya karti?
Jinn sai piyar ho unhain roshani main raka jata hai
Un kai rastoon sai kantain hatain jatain hian
Main andhera kesai karti main kanta kesai banti?
Usai kesai batati main karti bhi ti kiya karti?
Ussai kai sath rehna ab mushkil hai
Us sai bichr kai bhi ji nahin na paoon gi.
Main karoon bhi to kiya karoon, Tu hi bata?

By Subha

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SOCHA HAY..

Main sochatin kooch hoon hota kooch hai
Jo main sochatin hoon wo hota nahin hai
Ab main nai yai socha hai kai
Main kooch soochon gi hi nahin
Magar meri bebasi to deko
Yai bhi to socha hai
Kai main nai socha hai!

By Subha

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Nice one thanks 4 sharing!

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hmm nice...

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Maza aya .. Pata chala :devil:

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I am not editing it i wanted to give my comments line by line.... so that is why this is like this

Haan wo lamhai mushkil tha
Mujj pai bhi or tum pai bhi
(asay lamhay siraf mushkil he nahi bohat mushkil hotay hain)
Main jantain hoon magar
In mushkil rastoon ko asan banana
Merai baas main tha
(donooo main say aak ya kar sakta hai...)
Main kiya karti?
Jinn sai piyar ho unhain roshani main raka jata hai
Un kai rastoon sai kantain hatain jatain hian
Main andhera kesai karti main kanta kesai banti?
Usai kesai batati main karti bhi ti kiya karti?
Ussai kai sath rehna ab mushkil hai
Us sai bichr kai bhi ji nahin na paoon gi.
Main karoon bhi to kiya karoon, Tu hi bata?

and above all this is the master piece and i like it very much... thanks for sharing.... great work.... keep it up

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nice

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*Originally posted by Awaz20: *
nice
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hansti ankhoon ko ansoo dey jatey hain..........wada kar key bhi nah wapis atey hain
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Re: Yai Kesi Mushkil Hai?

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*Originally posted by Swera: *
Haan wo lamhai mushkil tha
Mujj pai bhi or tum pai bhi
Main jantain hoon magar
In mushkil rastoon ko asan banana
Merai baas main tha
Main kiya karti?
Jinn sai piyar ho unhain roshani main raka jata hai
Un kai rastoon sai kantain hatain jatain hian
Main andhera kesai karti main kanta kesai banti?
Usai kesai batati main karti bhi ti kiya karti?
Ussai kai sath rehna ab mushkil hai
Us sai bichr kai bhi ji nahin na paoon gi.
Main karoon bhi to kiya karoon, Tu hi bata?

By Subha
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Bohat acha :)
Thanks for sharing....

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Re: SOCHA HAY..

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Main sochatin kooch hoon hota kooch hai
Jo main sochatin hoon wo hota nahin hai
Ab main nai yai socha hai kai
Main kooch soochon gi hi nahin
Magar meri bebasi to deko
Yai bhi to socha hai
Kai main nai socha hai!

By Subha
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Bouhat khoob

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its nice :k:

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nice one swera thanks 4 sharin..:)

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bohot achi hai :k: :flower1:

thanku 4 sharing

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bout khoob:k::k:
thnaks

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
Nice one thanks 4 sharing!
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Thanks and your welcome :)

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*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *
hmm nice...
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thank you:)

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Shukariya.:slight_smile:

Shukar hay.

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
I am not editing it i wanted to give my comments line by line.... so that is why this is like this

Haan wo lamhai mushkil tha
Mujj pai bhi or tum pai bhi
(asay lamhay siraf mushkil he nahi bohat mushkil hotay hain)

and above all this is the master piece and i like it very much... thanks for sharing.... great work.... keep it up
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Thanks Dilsay.
:)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Awaz20: *
nice
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Thank you :)

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Kooch loog atain hain zindagi main haamari
Jo rotay main hansa detain hian
Jo anssoo poonch letain hian
Toota hwa dill joor detain hian

( sochnay ki baat hay kiya aisa nahin hota???):confused: