Yahan Tum Phir Bhi Aaoge Magar Milna Nahi Hoga..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity May 21, 2010, 10:20am 1

Aik Ghazal,

Mohabbat Ke Safar Mai Yuun Koi Tanha Nahi Hoga
Chalenge Dhoop Main Or Sath Main Saaya Nahi Hoga

Jafayen Seh Ke Dosti Karna Sikhaya Hai Usay Mainay
Kisi Ka Dost To Hoga Agar Mera Nahi Hoga

Juda Hotay Ho To Jee Bhar Ke Dekh Lene Do Surat
Yahan Tum Phir Bhi Aaoge Magar Milna Nahi Hoga

Mohabbat To Jatayenge Buhat Se Chaahne Wale
Magar Tum Aazma Lena Koi Humsa Nahi Hoga

punjabi_kuri_1 May 21, 2010, 10:21am 2

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WOW nice one

Boredman May 21, 2010, 10:52am 3

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Sannan May 21, 2010, 11:38am 4

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Nice one but just reminding me a cute she'r

Hum Kuch Aisay Sada Dil Bhi Hain Jo Dil Jore gai to Jore Gaiy
Par Sath he Ghairat Mand bhi Hain Jo Mukh More gai to More gaiy

BM ;) wat u think

Boredman May 21, 2010, 11:49am 5

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Cool Let Me Also Come Out Without Something Sannan I am Writing Other Side Wait Let Me Post It !!!!!!!!!

Boredman May 21, 2010, 11:53am 6

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kisi k pyaar main likhay huvay geeton k gulaab
aaj baazaar main laayay hain, khareeday ga koi?

Here I Comes Sannan BHai !!!!!

Sannan May 21, 2010, 11:57am 7

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm so now its my turn …

Kia Loog Thay Kah Jaan say Barh Kar Aziz Thay
Aab Dil say Mahao Naam Bhi Aksar Kay Ho gaiy

kaisa

Boredman May 21, 2010, 12:01pm 8

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Now Me

Ghar se bahar wo naqab me nikli,
Fir sari gali unki firak me nikli.,
Inkar karte the wo hamari Mohabbat ko,
Aur hamari hi Tasveer unki kitab se nikli.,

Sannan May 21, 2010, 12:09pm 9

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This is Hilarius

Now me in the same tone but in the serious mood

Murr Kar Jiss Shakhas nay hum ko naheen Daikha
Uss Shakahs kay HathooN par Maira Naam likha tha

Boredman May 21, 2010, 12:17pm 10

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Bata Tujhsa Hasin Kaun Hai Aey Dilbar, Ki Teri Hi
Zulfo,n Ne Meri Suboh Ko, Shaam Kar Diya Hai.

Yun Barse Hain Jhoom Ke Tere Ehsason Ke Badal
Ki Banjar Se Dil Ko B Mere, Gulfaam Kar Diya Hai.............

If I Dont answer To This shame on writing powerful feelings on pages of this fate

terray_naam May 21, 2010, 3:40pm 11

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Mohabbat To Jatayenge Buhat Se Chaahne Wale
Magar Tum Aazma Lena Koi Humsa Nahi Hoga

Bohat khoob

babri May 21, 2010, 5:40pm 12

Bohat Alaa … :k:

Dania May 21, 2010, 7:35pm 13

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:k:

babri May 21, 2010, 9:14pm 14

that was cool :k:

Aryaan May 22, 2010, 12:09am 15

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Bohat Khoob Ahmer..:k:

redidentity May 23, 2010, 1:43pm 16

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thanks everyone for appreciation as well as contribution.. :)

Boredman May 23, 2010, 2:40pm 17

Never Mind Dude We All Are In The Family..... Keep Sharing. :)

redidentity May 24, 2010, 4:22am 18

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Boredman

bellacullen May 26, 2010, 1:07am 19

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vry nyccc