Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa...??

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa…??

Kitnay bholay ho tum…!!

kia tum ko nahe pata…??

yahan mohabat ke alambardar nahe bastay…

yahan wafadar nahe bastay…

yahan koun janta khuloos kia ha…

yahan koun aashna ha rishtoun ki lazatoun sa…

yahan sab aapnay hi dastay hain…

yahan sirf jafakar bastay hain…

Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa…??

Kitnay bholay ho tum…!!**

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Re: Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa…??

Nice one :k:

Shayar ko chahiye ke ilaqa badal le.. ya phir doosre shehr main transfer karwale

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Re: Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa...??

Jahan bhi ja`ayn gy yehi Mahool mily ga.......

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who is the poet?

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Sahi Yaad nhi

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Re: Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa…??

Ab to unn ki nai books nahin aa rahin shayad.. pehle to mahana deevan nikalta tha in ka :hehe:

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Sorry bro…Shayad ye unki nhi hy…

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Koi baat nahi.. phir aap ye samajh len maine likhi hai :p

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doll86, what do you think who could be the poet? Any guesses based on the style?

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Badshahon jaisi Mohabbat wali hy....Farhat Abbas Shah ki

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maiN bhii yehii sawaal poochhne jaa rahaa thaa…lemme think…:hmmm:…kahiiN Parveen Shaakir to nahiiN…i admit that i haven’t read her even one complete Ghazal/nazam :frowning:

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Re: Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa...??

I don't think so... Parveen Shakir wali niswaniyat ka fuqdaan hai iss Nazm main.. Definitely kisi Mard shayar ne likhi hai.

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if u know then let me know pl

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i give up ... i think i must come out of Ghalib era and know more about 'today's sho'ara' :D

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Re: Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa...??

Toba karen kiyun asatiza pe tohmat laga rahe hain

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kia waqa'ii unkii rooH taRap gaii hogii? :D

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:emmy: kahin asatiza ke dor main azad nazmen bhi likhi gai thin? :faizy:

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Re: Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa…??

isii liye to nahiiN pahchaan paa rahaa huN k shaa’ir kaun hai…maiN to puraanii dunyaa kaa baashinda huN :slight_smile:

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Re: Yahan dhondtay ho tum wafa...??

User Name=Angle_89

ny Poet Kornar mein Post ki hy,
Jahan Sirf apni likhi hoi poetry post krny ki ijazat hy......
Bas abhi to itna hi pata chala hy.

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:k: