Yadoon ka ek jhoonka aya humse milne barsoo bad
pehle itna roe na the jitna roe barsoo bad.
Lamha lamha ghar ujrah hai mushkil se ehsas hua
pathar aye barsoo pehle sheshee torte barsoo bad.
Aj humari kakh pe duniya rone dhone berthi hai
phool hoe hai jane kaise itne saaste barsoo bad.
Bhool bhi jao kisne torra kaise torra kio torra
doondh rahe ho kia galiyon me dil ke tokre barsoo bad.
Dastak ki umid lagae kab tak kaise jie hum
kal ka wada karne wale milne ae barsoo bad.
bhut khoob sunny ji :k:
Nice:)
Re: Yadoon ka ek jhoonka.................
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*Originally posted by SunnyBoy: *
Dastak ki umid lagae kab tak kaise jie hum
kal ka wada karne wale milne ae barsoo bad.
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Excellent verse.. It always takes me to unknown places!!!
Re: Yadoon ka ek jhoonka…
Chalhe jee har jagha aap neh itni tareef ki humhari shairi ki to aap ki bhi kar dekhte hai:rolleyes:
mazak kar rehi thee bohot hi achi hai …i like it:k:
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*Originally posted by SunnyBoy: *
dastak ki umeed lagae kab tak kaise jie hum
kal ka wada karne wale milne ae barsoo baad
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nice one SB taste acha hota ja raha ;)
excellent...
Re: Re: Yadoon ka ek jhoonka…
Haaan jeee Mirchay Kam Kar di Hain na … 
P.S. : Thx All .
bahut khoob sunny ji :)
bohat hi zabadast sunny uncle :k: :k:
really beautiful…
thx.
Re: Yadoon ka ek jhoonka.................
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*Originally posted by SunnyBoy: *
Yadoon ka ek jhoonka aya humse milne barsoo bad
pehle itna roe na the jitna roe barsoo bad.
Lamha lamha ghar ujrah hai mushkil se ehsas hua
pathar aye barsoo pehle sheshee torte barsoo bad.
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Have some merci! on us. Sunny! bhut hi dukhi sher laktye ho.
Re: Re: Yadoon ka ek jhoonka…
Farhina jee bas ab kia keh sakhte hai …yeh to bohot dukhi hai …aur jab inshaan dukhi hota hai to esha hi kuch likhe gha na…Yeh humhare liye Aunty doondh rehe hai ..lekin inhein kohi mil nahin rehi na isliye kafhee udaas hai …umaar bhi ab itni ho ghay hai ..hum neh to Uncle jee ko pehlee hi keh diya tha keh jaldee seh kohi doondh leh nahin to baad main kohi milhein ghee nahin …
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NOW I REALLY FEEL MERCI ON SUNNY . MAY HE FIND HIS HUMSAFAR SOON .
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*Originally posted by Farhina: *
NOW I REALLY FEEL MERCI ON SUNNY . MAY HE FIND HIS HUMSAFAR SOON .
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Yah right...bas ab kar bhi kia sakhte hai ...sab mil kar duwa karte hai ......
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*Originally posted by Nayab: *
Yah right...bas ab kar bhi kia sakhte hai ...sab mil kar duwa karte hai ......
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you are lil angel pray for him.
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*Originally posted by Farhina: *
you are lil angel pray for him.
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Hmm angel to hum hai hi lekin woh bhi dil seh....lekin yeh jo Uncle jee hain na inhein koun batain....
Dastak ki umid lagae kab tak kaise jie hum
kal ka wada karne wale milne ae barsoo bad.
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nice:)