yadein

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 20, 2002, 2:40am

bohut he mud-dad ke baad kal jub
ketab-e-mazee ko mein ne kohla
bohut se cehrae nazar mein utare
bohut se namoon pe dil paceecha
aik aisa sahfa bhi us mein aaia
likha hoaa thaa jo ansoon se
ke jis ke unwaan ‘hum safar’ thaa
jo sahfa sub se he moatabar thaa
kuch aur ansoo phir is pe tapkae
phir is se aage mein pahr na paya
ketab-e-mazee ko band kar ke
tumharee yadoon mein koh gaya mein
agar to milta to kesa hota
inhee khailoon mein soo gaya mein

amir bin ail

XkanwalX · December 20, 2002, 4:13am

:(

Azad · December 20, 2002, 5:14am

Beautiful

Dilsay · December 20, 2002, 7:34am

Very nice

Very nice.....

Thanks

arifnawaz1 · December 20, 2002, 7:47am

Bahut khoob :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 21, 2002, 4:32am

thanks a lot
kanwal
azad
dilsay
arifnawaz

nikii · December 21, 2002, 10:40pm

nice:)

Capricorn · December 21, 2002, 10:44pm

:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 22, 2002, 2:24am

bohut bohut shukria
nikki
capricorn

Jaan_Lewaa · December 22, 2002, 2:28am

bhut khoob:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 22, 2002, 2:40am

thanks
jaan lewaa

Jaan_Lewaa · December 22, 2002, 2:41am

u kum kum

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 22, 2002, 2:50am

u welcome aur kum kum:confused:

CoOL_NetizeN · December 22, 2002, 7:24am

Bohut khoobsoorat hay
ab tu mein waqaiii…

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 23, 2002, 2:46am

bohut bohut shukria coOL~NetizeN:flower1:
dont sleep.u gona fall down from ur computer chair:mocking: