yaadooN ne teri aa k ka'ee zakham udharay haiN

Koyal · January 24, 2003, 9:17pm

shabnum ki Oor’nee maiN phoolooN me muh chupa’eya
paNi ne khaamshi maiN sur -saat baa’kheray haiN
Koyal ki kook sun kar dhuN visal ki chirii hai
yaadooN ne teri aa k ka’ee zakham udharay haiN

guybrush · January 24, 2003, 9:53pm

aww these ruthless yadeein :(

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 25, 2003, 4:31am

Koyal · January 25, 2003, 9:20pm

:nono:

chand_chehra · January 25, 2003, 9:39pm

Re: yaadooN ne teri aa k ka’ee zakham udharay haiN

wowww very nice koyal sis :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · January 25, 2003, 9:42pm

bhut achay:k:

WiseGuy · January 25, 2003, 10:15pm

Re: yaadooN ne teri aa k ka'ee zakham udharay haiN

Bohat khoob Koyalya Jee :)

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

shabnum ki Oor'nee maiN phoolooN me muh chupa'eya
paNi ne khaamshi maiN sur -saat baa'kheray haiN
Koyal ki kook sun kar dhuN visal ki chirii hai
yaadooN ne teri aa k ka'ee zakham udharay haiN
[/QUOTE]

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 26, 2003, 1:08am

thanks

Dragon_King · January 26, 2003, 7:40am

:k:

Eastern_Thoughts · January 26, 2003, 10:54am

halaa.N kay pukaaraa thaa tum hii ne mujhe lekin
mahasuus huaa jaise **koyal **ne pukaaraa hai

mu.D kar bhii nahii.n dekhaa jho.nko.n kii tarah us ne
vo mere baraabar se ha.Nsataa huaa guzaraa hai

Philanthrope · January 26, 2003, 11:54am

Bohat khoob...

nikii · January 26, 2003, 1:14pm

nice :)

Koyal · January 27, 2003, 12:19pm

thanks phrmis..niki sis.dragon..jaan lawa..:)

Koyal · January 27, 2003, 12:20pm

koyal ne pukara jab aista se usay:blush:

:k: baqie ka misrah phir sahi..

Koyal · January 27, 2003, 12:23pm

Re: Re: yaadooN ne teri aa k ka’ee zakham udharay haiN

Koyal · January 27, 2003, 12:24pm

Re: Re: yaadooN ne teri aa k ka’ee zakham udharay haiN

many thanks C_C g…

Azad · January 27, 2003, 2:13pm

chalain kisi kay kaam to aain yaadain ... :D

Azad · January 27, 2003, 2:16pm

on a 2nd thought thoRa sa hum wazahat kardain …salees urdu main …hum pochna chah rahay tha …yeh yaadon nay darzi ka kaam kab say shoru kia hay???

Koyal · January 27, 2003, 4:32pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
chalain kisi kay kaam to aain yaadain ... :D
[/QUOTE]

wohi tu :)

Koyal · January 27, 2003, 4:38pm

aik he dafa sab thought ko jama kar lain phir ikatha reply karey ghi