tanha dil hai mera
kion udas hai yeh mann
ajeeb see kasak hai
aur ajeeb see chuban
ashkion ne aankhon ko dooba dia
palkon ne sapnon ko sula dia
kuch pyaree yaadon ka sahara hai
aaj bhee haq is dil pe tumhara hai
chup gae chaand taray bhee
so gaee woh hawa awara bhee
ab tou sar pe soraj kee tapish hai
aur pairon main kaanton see chuban hai
I am not good at it, but lets give it a try 
hummm
wooooooohoooooooooooooooo pd tu shayira kubh sai bun gayee, ZABARDUST YAR 
abbh zara dedicate bhi kurr do innh ko 
thanx mahnoor, I am shaira yaar, if any poet read my poetry they might their own grave n jump in it dedicated to whom, okay I am gonna give u this honor, why don’t u do it for me
zabardust:k:
thanx JL 
first time in urdu, 
hardest task ever
so true
Re: yaadien
can’t belive…I must admit you have vision, you have depth 
superb PD
chup gae chaand taray bhee
so gaee woh hawa awara bhee
ab tou sar pe soraj kee tapish hai
aur pairon main kaanton see chuban hai
^
I like this part the most:)
thanx ata bhai and AQ bhai
cho chweet 
very nice PD
PD:eek: yaqeeen nahin aaeing:eek: tusssi itna acha likti hoooooooooooooo
zabardast naaaaaaaaaa:k::k:
:k::k:
thanx sweety
rabika sis I gave it a try thanx for liking it
manan thanx
ab tou sar pe soraj kee tapish hai
aur pairon main kaanton see chuban hai
:k:
hey pagaldewani baatien tu tum aqalmandoon wali kerney laggi ho
its nioce :k:
fanx
choudhery paijaan is se phele kya mai ne bewaqoofi kee baat kee thee 