Re: Yaad kee dar gha
no, in fact you did imprve it
and it sets the tone a lot better, as well.
thanks!
Yaad kee dar gha Pani num in chulmun ankhoon mey Kae saloon kee talash Ehsas ka lumha chokath per kahee meiree iss keye naam ke qibah asr aisa nazar kee junmbish jam ho jaisey bar ha ka showk bar ha ka saroor intiha taweel taluk ** **girift kaho silsila wohee hey, phir sey kurbat ka tumharye "han sunnay ka" zindagi, ** *ubb nahee, * **ubb nahee... *aur meirey *
"Nahee kheney ka"!
Dushwari.
I think now it's better.......:D