Yaad E Watan

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 4:38pm

hum bhi araam utha saktay thay ghar pe reh kar
hamain bhi paala tha MAA BAAP ne dukh seh seh kar
waqt e rukhsat unnhain itna bhi na aye keh kar
goud main ansu jo tapkay rukh se beh kar
ussay hi tifal samajh lena ji behlanay ko
hum ne jab wadah e ghurbat main qadam rakha tha
doour tak YAAD E WATAN ayee thi samjhanay ko.

muqawwee123 · December 9, 2012, 4:45pm

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ye kab ki baat hai?

yousaf_shah · December 9, 2012, 4:48pm

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ye poochoo k ye baat kia hey?????????????????????????????

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 4:48pm

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Aik dafa ka zikar hai.. baqi ap khud samjhdaar hain :D

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 4:50pm

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ye wohi hai jo ap k ser k oper sy guzar gya

muqawwee123 · December 9, 2012, 4:50pm

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Good question.

PK batao kiya hai ye.. ye mat kehna pehle senti ho jaon to explain karoon gi :p (Kuch yaad aaya)

ehsan · December 9, 2012, 4:51pm

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Nice. :k:

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 4:55pm

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i was just thinking about that

ye nazam un logon k jazbaat ki akaasi karti hai jo log apna gharbaar maan baap apna watan chor ker dayar E gair mein rozi roti kmany jaty hainm

ye poem kuch adhoori c lagi but jitni b hai Guzara kar lain

yousaf_shah · December 9, 2012, 4:56pm

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humarey sir pay abhe kafi baal baqi hain…mhaki bhe beath jaie tu phans jati hey..
aap tu masha ala…

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 4:56pm

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ye daikhain samjhdaar log

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 4:57pm

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ap zaroor ayub khosa k rishtadaar hun gy phir to… Adaab sir jee

muqawwee123 · December 9, 2012, 4:58pm

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phir aap ko kiyun achi lagi.. kiya aap bhi tarkeen e watan main se hain

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 5:01pm

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nahi.. lekin hum insaniyat k naaty un k jazbaat samjhty aur unki qadar karty hain

yousaf_shah · December 9, 2012, 5:01pm

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aap ki is list main hum bhe shamil hain…thnx 4 this nazam

muqawwee123 · December 9, 2012, 5:03pm

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waddi aai Bilqees Edhi

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 5:04pm

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tussi saro

minu pata tussi kyun kya c explain karan a

muqawwee123 · December 9, 2012, 5:05pm

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kiyun kehya si

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 5:07pm

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kyun k main kal kalti maar layi c othun
tuwano laga k shayed minu gehrayi v pata k awain chad’di an :hinna:

muqawwee123 · December 9, 2012, 5:08pm

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changi gal ae.. per tu othon senti hona di gal kitti si…

punjabi_kuri_1 · December 9, 2012, 5:10pm

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o ty us waqt changy mood vch c… shayeri achi lagi… per jy main ody uty zyada ghor kardi ty fer udaas hi hona c ty sari raat fer is liye main cafe vch chali gyi masti kran