Yaad aongi

mama_ki_dua · July 10, 2008, 11:57pm

**Chaha hai maine bohat shiddat se tum ko
Main tumhain bohat shiddat se yaad aaongi

Yun sakoon se tum kabhi bhi so na sakoge
Ban ke Dil ki kasak raat bhar jagaoongi

Ab ke baras sawan Dil main aag lagaye ga
Bhigo’ge tum jab bhi baarish main main yaad aaongi

Her shair her nazam main nazar aayengi meri baatein
Parho’ge jab bhi koi shairi main yaad aaongi**

ASA · July 11, 2008, 6:19am

Re: Yaad aongi

Woh boli kon aksar yaad ata hai udaasi main
Mian bola kuch puraney raastey, bachpan or ek lerki

alimani786 · July 11, 2008, 8:40am

Re: Yaad aongi

Nice poetry

muncho · July 11, 2008, 11:43am

nice addition :)

muncho · July 11, 2008, 11:52am

Re: Yaad aongi

Yun sakoon se tum kabhi bhi so na sakoge
Ban ke Dil ki kasak raat bhar jagaoongi

ye "dil ki kasak" koi koh-kaaf ki makhlook tu nahi ?

K337 · July 11, 2008, 4:21pm

Re: Yaad aongi

mkd?? khaireeyat

mama_ki_dua · July 11, 2008, 4:24pm

Re: Yaad aongi

I read these somewhere yesterday. Socha likh doon :phati:

Ji sab kheriyat

Aryaan · July 11, 2008, 4:29pm

Re: Yaad aongi

Nice sharing Mama ki Dua...

S.786 · July 11, 2008, 4:31pm

Re: Yaad aongi

good 1