yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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ab hum pe khula ye raaz-e-chamaN uljha k baharoN maiN damaN
kantooN se niqlna asaaN tha phoolooN seY niqalNa mushkil hai

yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha
yaa misl-e-saba awaara thaY ya ghaR seY niqalna mushkil hai

likhteY rahaY khooN dil se jisaY taa’eed-e-nigha dost maiN hum
:teary3: ab is afsaanaY ka unwaaN badalna mushkil hai

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Re: yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha

very nice :k:

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Buhat khoob :k:

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Niceeeeeeeeeeeee:))

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zabardast! nikami ;)

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Re: yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha

bohat hi khoob NikamiJi:k:…thanx for sharing:)

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Re: yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

ab hum pe khula ye raaz-e-chamaN uljha k baharoN maiN damaN
kantooN se niqlna asaaN tha phoolooN seY niqalNa mushkil hai

yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha
yaa misl-e-saba awaara thaY ya ghaR seY niqalna mushkil hai

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very Nice NJ sis :)Thanks for sharing

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ab hum pe khula ye raaz-e-chamaN uljha k baharoN maiN damaN
kantooN se niqlna asaaN tha phoolooN seY niqalNa mushkil hai

bahot achha sher hai bahna. specially 2nd misra to bahot hi achha hai.
thanks for sharing.

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very very very nice nikamijano
:k:

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Very Nice NJ…, yeh Western Ppl bhi afsanoo pur yaqeen rukhtay hain? :stuck_out_tongue:

Mohsin Naqvi Says…

log har baat kaa afsaana banaa lete hai.n
sub ko haalaat kii rudaad sunaayaa na karo

ye zaruurii nahii.n har shaKhs masiihaa hii ho
pyaar ke zaKhm amaanat hai.n dikhaayaa na karo

shahar-e-ehasaas me.n pattharaav bahut hai.n ‘Mohsin’
dil ko shiishe ke jharo.nkho.n me.n sajaayaa na karo

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:crying:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muddi: *
Niceeeeeeeeeeeee:))
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shukriaaaaaaaaa aur ap hain kahan ap k warant niqaly huwey hain kisi k hathoon jaldi se judge k katharey main hazir hoon warna wo ap ko ghar se uthany a jaien ghi ;)..phir na kahna khabar nahi ki.....:)

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thanks chando g ...SB..gazal kisi ki...lamhay sis..ab kesi tabieat hia ap ki..:) keep smilling ..:) okkkk

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mashoom g tusi har waqat:nono: :teary3:

shhhhhh

http://www.jordysworld.de/emoticons/liebe74.gif

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
ab hum pe khula ye raaz-e-chamaN uljha k baharoN maiN damaN
kantooN se niqlna asaaN tha phoolooN seY niqalNa mushkil hai

bahot achha sher hai bahna. specially 2nd misra to bahot hi achha hai.
thanks for sharing.
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shukria Pra g.....!

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Re: Re: yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha

thanks AMal ..wesay suchi suchi bata dain daar k marey tu nahi na tareaf kar rahya…

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:k:
Westren ppl ap ko pata hia khud he chaltey phirtey Afsana hotey hain unhin fursat kahan k Eastren ki tarha kisi Yaqeen k chaker main parey… :wink:

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Re: Re: yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

very Nice NJ sis :)Thanks for sharing
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thanks Gul_e_Tea..zara nawazi ap ki ap ki tashreaf yahan ati warna Nikami kis qabil..:)

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Re: yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha

Oh God kitna sach hai yeh!! mujh pe bhee yeh raaz abhee khula yeh parh ke :teary3:

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Re: Re: yaa hum se preshaN khushbo thei ya band haiN ab kaliOoN ki taRha

oh bari dair ki mehrban atey atey..:)…hamin be ab pata chala k ap phooloN main daman uljaey bethey thay…(btw ye phool hain kis baagh ka) :wink: