ya shayAd mujhey aesa lagta ho!

[rabika]

shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho …
key tum ko is terhan samney dehka to kia dehka
key rang hi badal gaey bahar key…
key shayad tum hi meri zindagi ki wohi gumghusta yaad ho
jisey bhool behthi thi mey aik ursey sey…
ya yeh bhi shayad mujhey lagta ho

khud fareby si khud fareby hey…
key shayad tumhey aik baar phir dehk ker…
hur taraf merey gul-e-lala bikher jaey…
hur raasta hi merey liyeh gul-e-rang hojaey…
ya shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

shayad key mey bohat sochey gaey hoon
hur us lamhey ko jub zindagi badal badal gai thi
key woh pal loat ker na aaey gein
jo ey dost terey saath guzarey they…
ya us jesey pal phir na aaein gey…
ya shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

qabal is key,key mey tujh ko
aik baar phir faramoosh kerdooon

mey tum ko woh sab batadooon
key jo tumhey aik baar phir saamney dehk ker yaaad aaey
woh lamhey mujhey bhoooley nahin
key jo terey firaaq mey guzarey…
teri bey wafaai bhi bhooli nahin
key tum ko is terhan saamney dehk ker
woh saarey lamhey jo bahar bunney ja rahey they
harey bharey zakhmoan sey rang badalney lagey
ya shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

yeh** shayad** teri yaadei’N meri zindagi mei’N
ik soye samander ki aise laharie’N hei’N
key terey wajood ka chand jab bhi en pey ubhrey ga
moj’oan ka jawarbhata un ki qismat bun jaey ga

ya yeh bhi shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

[nikii]

Re: ya shayAd mujhey aesa lagta ho!

*Originally posted by rabika: *

key tum ko is terhan saamney dehk ker
woh saarey lamhey jo bahar bunney ja rahey they
harey bharey zakhmoan sey rang badalney lagey
ya shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

yeh shayad meri zindagi mey aik jaagtey samander ki
aik aesi lahar hey
jo tujhey jub bhi dehkey gi moj’oan ka sahara
us ki zaroorat bun jaey gi

ya yeh bhi shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

bhut achii koshish ha Rabii :

I like the last part

ya yeh bhi shayad mughay asa lagta ho *sigh

jasay jasay likho gi aur tumari sha’ari mein aur nikhar aye ga

[Capricorn]

shayad key mey bohat sochey gaey hoon
hur us lamhey ko jub zindagi badal badal gai thi
key woh pal loat ker na aaey gein
jo ey dost terey saath guzarey they…
ya us jesey pal phir na aaein gey…
ya shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

Interesting. Liked it :k:

qabal is key,key mey tujh ko
aik baar phir faramoosh kerdooon

Still more interesting

[Dilsay]

Acha hai joo behi aap nay lekha hai

[rabika]

nikkko: thankoooooo janu nikkohugs

capricorn: yeh interestingsamhj nahin aaya…:

DS: thanks:-)

[Capricorn]

*Originally posted by rabika: *
capricorn: yeh interestingsamhj nahin aaya…:

Read it with reference to the context, samajh aa jana chahiye.

[rabika]

*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Read it with reference to the context, samajh aa jana chahiye provided samajh naam kee koi cheez payee ho aapne

dekhein! mey is waqt achey mood mey hooon doosrey mey apni is thread ko larai ki nazar nahin kerna chahti:hoonh:agar aap key paas provided AQAL jesei cheez hogi to aap jawaab nahin dein gey:silly:

[_TaNhAyAaN]

aww masha’Allah it’s soo sswwwett …

[rabika]

^thanks:snooty:

[rabika]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Read it with reference to the context, samajh aa jana chahiye.
[/QUOTE]

aagaya hey bohat achi terhan sey!

[Capricorn]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by rabika: *

aagaya hey bohat achi terhan sey!
[/QUOTE]

aa gaya hai waqaee mein bhee ya

[QUOTE]
ya shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho(hai)
[/QUOTE]
:p

[rabika]

^: aap mujhey bey aqal samhjtey hein?:

[Dania]

bohat achi koshish hai yaar:k: keep it up

[rabika]

^ shukiryaa...nawazish aap ki:-)

[chodhry]

Re: ya shayAd mujhey aesa lagta ho!

*Originally posted by rabika: *

shayad key mey bohat sochey gaey hoon
hur us lamhey ko jub zindagi badal badal gai thi
key woh pal loat ker na aaey gein
jo ey dost terey saath guzarey they…
ya us jesey pal phir na aaein gey…
ya shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

:k:

*Originally posted by rabika: *

qabal is key,key mey tujh ko
aik baar phir faramoosh kerdooon
mey tum ko woh sab batadooon

what an innocent expression

*Originally posted by rabika: *

yeh shayad meri zindagi mey aik jaagtey samander ki
aik aesi lahar hey
jo tujhey jub bhi dehkey gi moj’oan ka sahara
us ki zaroorat bun jaey gi

ya yeh bhi shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho

try to add choudhween ka chand (moon) in it. mou’JouN ka jwar bhata choudhween key chaand sey banta hey.

May be something like this:

yeh shayad teri yaadei’N meri zindagi mei’N
ik soye samander ki aise laharie’N hei’N
key terey wajood ka chand jab bhi en pey ubhrey ga
moj’oan ka jawarbhata un ki qismat bun jaey ga

[HAMMAD]

may nay kuch nahi dhaka

[rabika]

Re: Re: ya shayAd mujhey aesa lagta ho!

*Originally posted by chodhry: *

:k:

what an innocent expression

try to add choudhween ka chand (moon) in it. mou’JouN ka jwar bhata choudhween key chaand sey banta hey.

May be something like this:

yeh shayad teri yaadei’N meri zindagi mei’N
ik soye samander ki aise laharie’N hei’N
key terey wajood ka chand jab bhi en pey ubhrey ga
moj’oan ka jawarbhata un ki qismat bun jaey ga

thanks a lot bhaiyah:-)

ok chodry bhaiyah!

[chodhry]

Re: Re: Re: ya shayAd mujhey aesa lagta ho!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by rabika: *

thanks a lot bhaiyah:-)

ok chodry bhaiyah!:) :-)
[/QUOTE]

you are welcom lil sis :)

[rabika]

^wesey bhaiyah i wanted to tell n ask u sumthin:-)

key yeh jo mey ney likha tha ...

[quote]

yeh** shayad **meri zindagi mey aik jaagtey samander ki
aik aesi lahar hey
jo tujhey jub bhi dehkey gi moj'oan ka sahara
us ki zaroorat bun jaey gi

ya yeh bhi shayad mujhey aesa lagta ho
[/quote]

is ko mey ney toofaan sey tashbhi di thi key mey apni us dost ko jub bhi dehkooon gi to woh aik laher moj'aon ka sahara liyeh bhaighair nahin rahey gi...:-)

kia yeh sahi nahin tha?:-)

waiting for ur comments:-)

[Azad]

humm