ya phir sargoshi'aaN dil ki suna do phir chalay jaNa

Koyal · September 23, 2007, 3:19am

sakoot-e-jaa'N ka matlab bata do phir chalay jaNa ya phir sargoshi'aaN dil ki suna do phir chalay jaNa

jo mera aur tumhara waqt guzra hansnay ronay maiN
usay puri tarha se tum bhula do phir chalay jaNa

ye saray pay’er poday tum bin ka’ee raat jagay haiN
tum aa’kay ek baar in ko sula do phir chalay jaNa

kisi ko chah’ne ka aur kisi se cha’hay janay ka
jo hai ahsaas tum us ko bhulado phir chalay jaNa

bus ik murda hansi se apnay ashkoN ko chupanay ka
jo fun aata hai tum ko wo sikha do phir chalay jaNa

wo jo ik lafz-e-ulfat hai juda hai apnay maa’ni se
bus in alfaz-o-maa’ni ko mila do phir chalay jaNa

jo kehte kahte ruk gaye, un sari baton ki
sama’at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chalay jana

na janay q hai lakin dekhne ki tum ko aadat hai
meri ye be-waja aadat chura do phir chaly jana

Samad · September 23, 2007, 3:20am

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fantastic outstanding superbbbbbbbbb!

Shab-e-Hijar · September 23, 2007, 3:24am

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bohat khoob :k:

Koyal · September 23, 2007, 3:24am

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thanks ASN and welcome in ma thread....shukar hai ap ko tareef karnay k leay nahi kaha :D

AQ · September 23, 2007, 4:19am

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I posted this in my usernote and in my blog long time ago... the complete poem is as follows... one of my most favourites:

*sakoot-e-jaan ka matlab batado phir chalay jana *
*ya phir sargoshian dil ki suna do phir chalay jana *

*jo mera aur tumhara waqt guzra hansnay ronay may *
*usay puri tarha se tum bhulado phir chalay jana *

*ye saray pair poday tum bin kai raat jagay haiN *
*tum aakay ek baar inko sulado phir chalay jana *

*kisi ko chahne ka aur kisi se chahay janay ka *
*jo hai ahsaas tum usko bhulado phir chalay jana *

bus ik murda hansi se apnay ashko ko chupanay ka **
**jo fun aata hai tum ko, wo sikhado phir chalay jana

*wo jo ik lafz-e-ulfat hai, juda hai apnay maani se *
*bus in alfaz-o-mani ko milado phir chalay jana *

*jo kehte kahte ruk gaye, un sari bato ki *
*sama'at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chalay jana *

*na janay q hai lakin dekhne ki tum ko aadat hai *
*meri ye be-waja aadat chura do phir chalay jana *

*merey in roz-o-shab ka ek fakat unwan bus tum ho *
*mujhe tum doosra unwan lado phir chalay jana *

HAIDER ki koshish, ay Khuda, na jaye raigan, **
**mujhe is sabr ka kuch phal dila do phir chalay jana....

SJ · September 23, 2007, 5:57am

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Nice sharing Koyal Sis:)

Koyal · September 23, 2007, 10:50am

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thanks sonia g :)

Koyal · September 23, 2007, 10:51am

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Anwaar Qureshi:

I posted this in my usernote and in my blog long time ago... the complete poem is as follows... one of my most favourites:

*sakoot-e-jaan ka matlab batado phir chalay jana * *ya phir sargoshian dil ki suna do phir chalay jana *

*jo mera aur tumhara waqt guzra hansnay ronay may * *usay puri tarha se tum bhulado phir chalay jana *

*ye saray pair poday tum bin kai raat jagay haiN * *tum aakay ek baar inko sulado phir chalay jana *

*kisi ko chahne ka aur kisi se chahay janay ka * *jo hai ahsaas tum usko bhulado phir chalay jana *

bus ik murda hansi se apnay ashko ko chupanay ka ** **jo fun aata hai tum ko, wo sikhado phir chalay jana

*wo jo ik lafz-e-ulfat hai, juda hai apnay maani se * *bus in alfaz-o-mani ko milado phir chalay jana *

*jo kehte kahte ruk gaye, un sari bato ki * *sama'at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chalay jana *

*na janay q hai lakin dekhne ki tum ko aadat hai * *meri ye be-waja aadat chura do phir chalay jana *

*merey in roz-o-shab ka ek fakat unwan bus tum ho * *mujhe tum doosra unwan lado phir chalay jana *

HAIDER ki koshish, ay Khuda, na jaye raigan, ** **mujhe is sabr ka kuch phal dila do phir chalay jana....

thanks a bunch 4 puri gazal when i read this i really liked aur wanted to share with every one...didn't know u have it cuz me kabhi ap k belog main gaye he nahi :D

AQ · September 23, 2007, 10:51am

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I had enough people reading and coming to my blog anyway ;-)

Koyal · September 23, 2007, 10:52am

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that's why i neva bother ma self to go there :).me wahan jati jahan koi nahi jata..
aisay reply kitni jaldi main atye :D

AQ · September 23, 2007, 10:55am

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theek hai.. aap waheeN raho jahaaN koi naheeN aataa..

PS: jaldi reply kee kiyaa baat hai... it's always good to answer an unfair concern ASAP.... :)

fizatiq · September 23, 2007, 10:57am

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beautiful poem............thanks for sharing

Koyal · September 23, 2007, 11:01am

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yap an u are #1 hai na :D

Koyal · September 23, 2007, 11:03am

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thanks fiz and welcome here :)

sunny_nicky · September 23, 2007, 2:34pm

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nicceee

Koyal · September 26, 2007, 2:25am

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thanks :)

K_Khan · September 26, 2007, 2:35am

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nice one kookoo... :)

Koyal · September 26, 2007, 2:50am

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thanks KK tusi abhi taak jaag ray

K_Khan · September 26, 2007, 2:59am

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sama`aton kai talabgaar iTne jaldi naheen soutai..

Koyal · September 26, 2007, 3:01am

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oh aur chahtooN k talabgarooN ko neend bohat ati