Ya kiya

Dilsay · February 13, 2003, 5:22pm

Ya kiya ka tum nay mohabat ka wasta day kar
Hamari ankhoon ko bandaha hai rat jagoo ka azab

** by Dilsay**

Philanthrope · February 13, 2003, 5:44pm

Wah…bohat khoob Dilsay :k:

system · February 13, 2003, 7:21pm

Bohat khoob, :k::k:

Azad · February 13, 2003, 7:35pm

Yaar waqee dilsay .... hum nay kaha tha na "na hanssa kar ujarr halon par"

chand_chehra · February 13, 2003, 7:38pm

:k:

Bhooli_Bisri · February 13, 2003, 8:02pm

bhai mein ne apki kavish mein apne khayal se kuch raddo badal kiya hai shayad apko pasand ajae

[quoted: Hamari ankhoon ko bandaha hai rat jagoo ka azab]

**
meri ankhoon ko baksha hai ratjagon ka azab**

apne aara se zaroor mustafeez kejeyeyaga, shukriya.

Dilsay · February 14, 2003, 5:43am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Bhooli Bisri: *
bhai mein ne apki kavish mein apne khayal se kuch raddo badal kiya hai shayad apko pasand ajae

[quoted: Hamari ankhoon ko bandaha hai rat jagoo ka azab]

**
meri ankhoon ko baksha hai ratjagon ka azab**

apne aara se zaroor mustafeez kejeyeyaga, shukriya.
[/QUOTE]

**
App ke koshish behi achi hai....

jis ko jis taraha ratgagay milay hoon vo usi taraha likhay ga na... hamaray laya us kay pass bakshish behi nahi thee... jo kuch behi us nay diiya baas rooh kay sath bandah he diya... yaad, dard, aur ratgagay... **

Guest7777 · February 14, 2003, 6:44am

Dilsay acha likha aap nai but sad.... i think kai acha nahi hua :(

Azad · February 14, 2003, 10:30am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

**
App ke koshish behi achi hai....
**
[/QUOTE]

Dilsay suna hay koi phool kay badlay bhainss lay gia ... yeh kog bhi kitnay aqal kay andhay hain .... ussay to koi mouft main gobi ka phool bhi na day :D

guybrush · February 14, 2003, 1:49pm

very nice dilsay :k: