word catch from shair

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Sooraj ke saath doob gaya mera dil bhi aaj
Itna udaas shaam ka **manzar
* kabhi na thaa ...

*

Yeh keh ke doob gaya aaj aakhri **sooraj
**ke ho saky tu isi shab ko ab sahar kehna
kbhi wo chand jo pochy ke shehr kaisa hai
bujhy bujhy hoe lagty hen bam-o-dar kehna

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Main tujhain dhondne yaadon ki khuli sarkon par
sookhay patton ki tarha roz** bikhar** jata hoooon.

Where was the word bikhar ???

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ON THE PREVIOUS PAGE...am realy sorry..

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Wudood, no problem ... But if there is a continuity going on, then I suggest you should wait for sometime so that you may have a better view of what to reply ...

Thank you for taking part ... :)

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A faseel-e-shehar se daikhain ghaneem-e-shehar ko
shehar jalta ho to tujh ko bam par dekhay ga kon?

realy here speed is dead but there was a miss understanding also i said sorry.......i think it's ok now..

Wudood,
You dont have to be sorry, misunderstanding hojaati hai ... so cheer up dude :)

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Tujh se milne ki saza denge tere **shehar* ke log
Yeh wafao'oun ka silla denge tere shehar ke log
Keh ke deewana mujhe maar rahe hain patthar
Aur kya is ke siwa denge tere shehar ke log ...*

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Mujh se tu poochnay aya hai wafa ke mani
Yea teri sada dili maar na dalay mujh kooo

Dil ne wafa ke naam par kaar-e-jafa naheen kiya,
Khud ko halaak kar liya khud ko fida naheen kiya...

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Teri is bewafai per **fida* hai jaan udaas
Na jaany agar tujh mein wafa hoti tau kya hota ...*

jo zara kisi ne cher'ha to chalak par'renge ansoo
koi mujh se yeh na poochay k mera dil udass q hai

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Mujh ko pagal bana gaye **Aansoo*
Jaane kya kya suna gaye aansoo
Koi roya thaa hichkeyoon se bahut
Aur kisi ko hansa gaye aansoo ...*

suna ha boley tu batoon se phool jhartey hain
yeh baat ha tu chaloo baat kar k dekhtey hain

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Wehshat us shaam ki aaj bhi sataati hai bahut
Tujh se bicharne ki woh **baat
* aaj bhi rulaati hai bahut ...*

wehshatain barhti gaen,mra junoo taaza hwa
phir kisii ki yaad ka shidaat sey andaaza hwa...

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**Shiddat-e-dard mein hontoo pe dua ka hona
Sabit is se bhi tau hota hai Khuda ka hona
Jane kya rang dekhayega yeh wehshi mausam
Is qadar shor dareechoon mein hawa ka hona ...

ussi key haath rakh deyna baharon key sabhi **mousam
**mujhey titli key par dey kar baharon ki duaa deyna....

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Roothnay ka haq aap rakhtay hain
Manaanay ki chaahat hum rakhtay hain
Aap ke hontoo pe muskurahat hamesha yunhi saji rahe
Yehi **dua
* Rab se hum roz kartay hain ...*