woH shaks aj bhi hum se hai badgumaa'N dekho

chand_chehra · February 13, 2002, 8:08pm

*** laho laho hai gulabooN ke dastaaN dekho huwe haiN qatl baharo main gulistaaN dekho

soee falak to sada dekhtay hi rahtay ho
kabhi to palkooN pe bikri ye kahkishan dekho

kisi ne dil lagi’dil ke lagi kisi ne kaha
kisi ke jazbooN ka ho bhi gya ziyaa’N dekho

shajar shajar ko khani tumhari bata di
saba ko samjha tha tumne hi razdaaN dekho

hamari ankho ke barsaat dekhtay kya ho
utar gaye hain laho main jo bijliyaaN dekho

nishaN uni ke haiN baqi kitabe hasti maiN
zamaNa karta raha jiN ko be nishaan dekho

fasele jisM hai chalni to sir salamat hai
ajeeb rooh main chalti hain andhiyaN dekho

… jis kaliye zindagi luta di hai
woH shaks aj bhi hum se hai badgumaa’N dekho

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
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HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

Capricorn · February 13, 2002, 8:15pm

Ufffffffffff CC zabardast…buhat hee khubsurat shair hai

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chand_chehra · February 13, 2002, 8:31pm

thankz cap

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

MARRIED_NY · February 13, 2002, 8:37pm

BOHAT KHUB CC LAJAWAB GHAZAL HAI

speed_master · February 14, 2002, 2:32am

very Nice ...
Buhat Khoob ....

Even If You Are Basically Stupid
You Can Still Meet Nice People !

NikamiJano · February 14, 2002, 2:34am

Bohat Khoob CHando

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~kabi alwida na kahNa~

Amjad_Chohan · February 14, 2002, 12:28pm

soee falak to sada dekhtay hi rahtay ho
kabhi to palkooN pe bikri ye kahkishan dekho

sirf sitaary daykhoo ya Chand bhi daykhoo

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aachi ghazal/Poem hay

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PS :- keya difference hoota hay Poem aur Ghazal main ?

ASA · February 14, 2002, 2:19pm

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nice..

Gemini_the_Great · February 14, 2002, 2:26pm

[quote]
Originally posted by chand_chehra:

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nishaN uni ke haiN baqi kitabe hasti maiN
zamaNa karta raha jiN ko be nishaan dekho

..... jis kaliye zindagi luta di hai
woH shaks aj bhi hum se hai badgumaa'N dekho

**
[/quote]

nice selection :)

"Don’t be shallow by saying: if people do good, we will do good; and if they do wrong, we will do wrong; but accustom yourselves to do good if the people do good, and not to do wrong if they do wrong."

Gemini_the_Great · February 14, 2002, 2:28pm

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yay kon bola

“Don’t be shallow by saying: if people do good, we will do good; and if they do wrong, we will do wrong; but accustom yourselves to do good if the people do good, and not to do wrong if they do wrong.”

Pramod · February 14, 2002, 5:01pm

shajar shajar ko khani tumhari bata di
saba ko samjha tha tumne hi razdaaN dekho

Very nice..Chand ji

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

chand_chehra · February 14, 2002, 11:46pm

thankzzz all

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

chand_chehra · February 14, 2002, 11:49pm

jis cheez ka zikar hai bus wohi dekho

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aur let me think ke kya diff hota hai gazal
or poem main hmmmm hmmmm
bhai jo poetry wazan wali lagay woh gazal
aur jo halki woh poem

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

[This message has been edited by chand_chehra (edited February 14, 2002).]

juMurA · February 15, 2002, 1:45am

BohaT khooOb

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chand_chehra · February 15, 2002, 8:49pm

bohat shukriya juMura ge

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