Woh Piyaar kee shaam deewaani see

A beautiful poem by our own Anwaar Qureshi. It has a unique touch of softness and warmth. Feel it :~)

**Kuch yaadaiN woh dau-paheroN kee
Kuch chaahoo’N ghannaY darakhtoN kee

woh unn-miTT chehraY bachpann kaY
woh baataiN jhil-mil taaroN kee

Woh chalnaa uss pag-dandi par
Woh grift mulaaim haathoN kee

Woh jaaRoN kee sard raatoN maiN
Thee MaaN kee gaud suhaani see

Ro-paheli piyaar kaY unn lamhoN maiN
Um’r kee qaid anjaani see

kahaaN gaYe woh, kidhar gaY woh
beetaY din haiN kahaani see

Yeh Naa-pe’d Ishq kay roz-o-Shab
Woh Piyaar kee shaam deewaani see **

By: Anwaar Qureshi

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buhat khoob :k:

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nice one Amal :)

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really sweet :-)

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hmmm.. I did not know that when you'd asked me about this poem, you were going to post it here :)... Thanks Amal.... means a lot to me... though I have been restricting myself to post anything here of my own for I have realized that this place is bigger than what I am and it requires some quality... I still have a lot of improvement to do to match up you guys :)


thank you Nikami ... Amal needs the credit to post it here :p

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haan na ap ne suna nahi k Khatoon dosreooN pe wah wah karwati :D

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beautiful poem...!!!!!
Anwar bhai u r so gud......i m amazed srsly....this poem is really really gud.....
Mein toh bikul hi nahi likh sakti!
I wish i could!

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Bohat Khoob Anwar bhai... very deep

thanks for sharing Amal

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Anwaar this is not ordinary stuff, at least in my opinon. I therefore posted it here immediately after seeing it.

And this place is only as bigger as you or anybody else. I would again say that you should share with us whatever you write. Even if people are 'sleeping', they cannot ignore sun for long :~)

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Beauti

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bohat khoob, thank you for sharing Amal.


Wah ree aajizi aur inkisaari itna kuch likh deeya aur farmaati keh "I wish I could" :p

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nahi.....i wish i could write poems!:D
Nice point though!

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beautiful poem…!!!

i wish k mujay b likhna ata :bummer:

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I guess i’ve missed a lot of posts in sho’ra-e-gupshup, well done anwar :k:

amal: well said :slight_smile:

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Wah ji wah anwaar qureshi bhai … aap tou chupay rustam niklay … thanx for sharing amal :flower1:

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Thank you everyone :~)

If it was not for Amal, I would not be receiving all this wah wah on some thing which loses it rythm in between couple of times... I really appreciate all of you...