woh mujh pay yun khula keh kucH bhi chupa nahiN tha

Shab-e-Hijar · February 28, 2007, 7:36pm

muddat say darmia'n maiN kuch raabta nahin tha phir bhi suna hay mujh ko woh bhoolta nahin tha
khusHboo ka woh mussafir maiN tishnagi ka sehra
daaman hay mera khali us ko pata nahiN tha

maiN ho kay mahv-e- hairat takti rahi thi usko
woh mujh pay yun khula keh kucH bhi chupa nahiN tha

uski nigaheiN mujh say kucH kah rahi thein us dam
main thi haaya sarapa kucH hausla nahin tha

SindSagar · February 28, 2007, 7:52pm

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**bahout khoob:biggthumb **
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HeArT_HaCKeR · February 28, 2007, 9:17pm

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Nice one shabbb :)

NikamiJano · March 1, 2007, 2:36am

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Gud one shab;)

Dada_Abbaa · March 1, 2007, 7:44am

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lol, good one lekin vakhri ... :-p

ps: shab, aap ka yeh kaisa count down hay ? :s

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 1, 2007, 8:14am

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Nice one shabo :-)

Shab-e-Hijar · March 1, 2007, 5:57pm

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thanks peepz

Shab-e-Hijar · March 1, 2007, 5:58pm

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unique

Aqls · March 2, 2007, 7:29am

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Bohat khoob

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 2, 2007, 10:42am

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kya hum sab ChiryaaN tootey heiN

Precious_Khan · March 2, 2007, 10:59am

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Buhat Khoob :~)

Shab-e-Hijar · March 2, 2007, 9:58pm

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thanks aqal less and khan

Shab-e-Hijar · March 2, 2007, 9:59pm

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kya pata

_MuNiYa · March 2, 2007, 10:04pm

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lovely

Fatee · March 2, 2007, 11:44pm

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beautiful ghazal Shab :-)

NikamiJano · March 3, 2007, 2:26am

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ap ko fursat mili shab k pass anay ki kabhi nikami k paas b do ghari’aN beth jaya karo g

Shab-e-Hijar · March 4, 2007, 2:01am

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thanks munia and fatee for liking it
fateeee add me in your journal buddy plgggg

Shab-e-Hijar · March 4, 2007, 2:01am

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