woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

kitna pagal hai rat ke sanate ke wajah poochta hai

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**woh muj se mere ansoo ke wajah poochta hai

kitna pagal hai barish ke barasne ke wajah poochta hai

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**woh muj se mere mohabbat ke bari me poochta hai

kitna pagal hai khod apne bari me poochta hai

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**woh muj se mere wafa ke inteha poochta hai

kitna pagal hai sahil pe khada hai samunder ke gehrai poochta hai**

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

khayalaat umda hain, magar wazan se hati hui ghazal hai

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

Can I have a translation please?:D

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

I said the central idea of ghazal is good, but its not fulfilling the criteria of ghazal.

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

Okay...I shall try harder next time to find a proper ghazal for you:)

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

lols. no I like main idea of your sharing. I just commented on technical side of the ghazal

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

nice sharing:lajawab:

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

Woh Bahut sawal karta hai

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

mohabbat mai itnay sawaal :hayaa:

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

sawalaat sy na ghabraayn.....Oper bataya to gaya hy k Wo Pagal hy........ Paglon ki baat ka kia bura maanna…

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Re: woh muj se mere khamoshi ke wajah poochta hai

:D