Woh khwab jo mein ne dekhe
un ke pa jaane tak kitna aur tarsoon
woh raah jis par chalte
thak sa gaya hoon
un khwabon ka bharam rakhna ya Rab
un raahon par mujhe rula na dena
PS: Originally I posted this in Anwaar’s thread magar kisee ne koi response na diya to socha yahan bhee kar doon. Kitna acha likhta hoon na mein 
bharam se mujhay kuch yaad aaya..par abhi sanjeeda mahoul hain to jaane dein :p
bohat khub partner...aap bhi line par aa gae hain :D
Aap ne mere shairana jauhar miss kar diye jo ke mein maazee mein dikhata raha hoon 
this one was spontaneous and wrote in a minute while reading that thread na…wese kaunsee line par aa raha hoon? 
Do u want me to re-post my poetry or look for that one which I havent posted as yet? 
achi hai..
wesay khair to hai ap nai poetry shooroo ker di:p
humm
very nice capri :)
nice :)
Gham-e-duniya hai aur shiddat-e-blah blah 
ghosla afzaee ka shukriya borrowing from khanu’s articulation
Azad: hummm
cuteepie: shukriya 
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diya tha:hoonh: agar aap ghoar sey perhtey to:snooty:
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Aisay hee tone mein diya hoga jaisa ke yeh hai 
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shukar karein dey diya:snooty:
PS.
Or?
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shukriya
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*Originally posted by Swera: *
Or?
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blah blah
un khwabon ka bharam rakhna ya Rab
un raahon par mujhe rula na dena
Nice :k:
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waqui bohat acha likha hey:-)
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*Originally posted by rabika: *
waqui bohat acha likha hey:-)
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Two verses more and some polishing may make it reasonable :)
it is still reasonable:-)