woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal September 24, 2006, 11:53am 1

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Benaam Sa Ye Dard, Thehar Kyon Nahi Jata
Jo Beet Gaya Hai, Woh Guzar Kyon Nahi Jata

sab kuch to hai kya dhundti rehti hai nigaaheiN
kya baat hai mai waqt pe ghar kyoN nahi jata

wo ek hi chera to nahi sare jahaN meiN
jo door hai wo dil se utar kyoN nahi jata

maiN apni hi uljhi hui rahoN ka tamasha
jate haiN jidhar sab maiN udhar kyon nahi jata

woh naam jo na jane kab se na chehra na badaN hai
woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata***

SindSagar September 24, 2006, 11:58am 2

Re: woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

**Nice...:) **

Shumaisa September 24, 2006, 12:35pm 3

Re: woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

Buhat khoob..

HeArT_HaCKeR September 24, 2006, 3:34pm 4

Re: woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

Beautiful :)

mahamkhan September 24, 2006, 3:47pm 5

Re: woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

zabardast sharing

sunny_nicky September 24, 2006, 7:53pm 6

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buhat khoooooooooob maham thx 4 sharingg

THREADS AND MOTIFS........

Bholay_Bisray September 24, 2006, 8:08pm 7

Re: woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

:) and beautifully sung!

Zamil September 24, 2006, 8:16pm 8

Re: woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

Aahahaha…
Ham to qaayal hain aap k intakhaab k…hamesha se
**Is zameen mein ham ne bhi ghazal kahi thi, kabhi sunaayeN ge **

Prince_Ali September 25, 2006, 1:47pm 9

Re: woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

Very nice :k:

IS September 26, 2006, 4:59am 10

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Bohat Khoooooob :-)

NikamiJano September 26, 2006, 5:35pm 11

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:k: nice one koyal

shoaib_akhter September 26, 2006, 7:12pm 12

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bohat he khoob.

sour_candy September 26, 2006, 9:29pm 13

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its nice,but difficult to read ur roman,sorry eh!

K_Khan September 27, 2006, 7:27pm 14

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nice one KOKo…

Koyal October 2, 2006, 2:25am 15

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thanks :)

Can U Fall In lUv With ThE PErsOn AbOvE U?

Koyal October 2, 2006, 2:33am 16

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thanks :)

Ehsass October 2, 2006, 7:01pm 17

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[quote]

*****woh naam jo na jane kab se na chehra na badaN hai **
woh khawaab agar hai to bikhar kyoN nahi jata

[/quote]

buhat khob ji zabardast kalam

muddii October 3, 2006, 3:09am 18

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Hmmmmm nice choice as usual...........waisay yeh bhee banker shair lagta hai

goodnews October 3, 2006, 3:18am 19

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*Benaam Sa Ye Dard, Thehar Kyon Nahi Jata
Jo Beet Gaya Hai, Woh Guzar Kyon Nahi Jata ***
** Khub:k:

EEMAAN October 3, 2006, 11:08am 20

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bohat khoob,,my most favourite..

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