Woh aks ban ke meri chashm-e-tar mein rehta hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

babri July 18, 2007, 1:08pm 1

Woh aks ban ke meri chashm-e-tar mein rehta hai
Ajeeb shakhs hai paani ke ghar mein rehta hai…
Woh to meri shab-e-gham ka aik piyambar hai
Woh ik sitara jo chashm-e-sehar mein rehta hai…
Jo mere honton pe aaye to gungunaoon usey
Woh shair ban ker bayaz-e-nazar mein rehta hai…
Guzarta waqt mera gamgisar kiya hoga
Woh khud taaqub shaam-o-sehar mein rehta hai..
Mera hi roop hai tu gour se agar dekhiye
Bagola sa jo teri rah guzar mein rehta hai…
Na jaane kaun hai jis ki talash mein ‘bismil’
Har ik saans mera ab safar mein rehta hai

Ek sis k naam.

Amal July 18, 2007, 1:14pm 2

Re: Woh aks ban ke meri chashm-e-tar mein rehta hai

Bohat umda poem hey… bohat baar parrhi lekin phir bhi new jesi :k: Thanx for sharing savenstar2003

deep_ocean July 18, 2007, 2:31pm 3

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very nice :k:

mhd.86 July 18, 2007, 5:04pm 4

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wah
mazah ah gayah parh k
great

SJ July 18, 2007, 5:07pm 5

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bohat khoob :)

Its ALL about the HALWA!

babri July 19, 2007, 4:51pm 6

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thanks Amal bahi

babri July 19, 2007, 4:53pm 7

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Thanks deep-ocean.

Prince_Ali July 19, 2007, 7:49pm 8

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:k:

Mistri

mariam July 19, 2007, 7:55pm 9

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**
khobsurat **

GuL-e-Tasbeeh July 20, 2007, 12:37pm 10

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buhat khoob 7star :-)

EEMAAN July 20, 2007, 1:27pm 11

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Very nice..

babri July 22, 2007, 4:58pm 12

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shukeriya janab.

babri July 22, 2007, 5:01pm 13

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thanks M_F sis.

babri July 22, 2007, 5:02pm 14

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mehrbani GUL jii

babri July 22, 2007, 5:03pm 15

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Nawazish EEMAAN.

mhd.86 July 22, 2007, 5:36pm 16

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savenstar pai jaan
aap ko gujar nai psand kya
sab ka thnx u kia mera nai

goodnews July 22, 2007, 7:55pm 17

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Amal sy muttafiq hon ky buhat bar pehi hy her bar naya lutf ata hy prhny ka Shukriya, share krny ka:)

Saqi_the_angel July 23, 2007, 4:56pm 18

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Hmmm Bhaut khoob.

Bhat ach Choice, I am sure Ek Sis tumhaiN miss karegi

babri July 23, 2007, 5:54pm 19

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i am sorry Gujjar bai i am sure mujh s miss ho gaya app ko thanks kehna warna aise kabi hua nahi.
PK main mere city k naam main b Gujar ata hai is liye na-pasand hone ka sawal hi pehda nahi hota.
Raaz ki ek aur baat bhee hai jo phir kabi batahon ga.
anyways i am sorry.
thanks alot.

babri July 23, 2007, 6:06pm 20

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thanks good news