woh ajnabi tha jo meray lahu main shamil tha!

Lamhay · January 31, 2002, 6:23pm

Woh ajanbi tha jo meray lahoo main shamil tha
meri wafa ka meri chaahatoon ka hasil tha

ye aur baat kay majbooriyaan rahi iski
kabhi kabhi tu meri khwahishoon ka katil tha

main apna zakhum dikhanay bhala kahan jati
yahan tu haar koi apnoo kay ghum say ghayal tha

woh wardaat bhi karta raha kareenay say
sutoon e daar hi uskay kiye ka hasil tha

main iski zaat per ab aitbaar kiya karti
najanay kitno kay armaan o dil ka qatil tha

suna hai deer talak usko gungunata raha
woh aik sher hi meri ghazal ka hasil tha!

Dekh Ruswaee ka sauda hai ab na kabhi
Itnni shiddat say kisi shaks ki chaahat karna,

raahaygi shama-e-wafa yunhi ta abaad roshan
ghazal kay roop main jeenay ka hosaala rakhna!

chand_chehra · January 31, 2002, 6:47pm

[quote]

Originally posted by Lamhay:
**Woh ajanbi tha jo meray lahoo main shamil tha
meri wafa ka meri chaahatoon ka hasil tha

ye aur baat kay majbooriyaan rahi iski
kabhi kabhi tu meri khwahishoon ka katil tha

**
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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HusaaN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

Lamhay · January 31, 2002, 7:05pm

Chand ji kia kehna tha ?????

Akif_zeb_1 · January 31, 2002, 8:47pm

very nice lamhay jee…

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mairay dill mairay mussafir

masoom_si · January 31, 2002, 11:13pm

mai iski izzat pe ab aitbaar kya karti
najane kitno ke arman o dil ka kaatil tha

Coooooolll

mini · January 31, 2002, 11:18pm

very nice indeed.... like the last misra the best.

khudi ko kar buland itna..ke har takdeer se phele
khuda bande se khud pooche..bata teri raza kia hai!!!

Pramod · February 1, 2002, 5:31am

Very Good.......Lamhe

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

Shaam-e-Firaq · February 1, 2002, 12:38pm

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bery hi Beautiful Lamhay

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“If you belong to Allah, rest assured that Allah will indeed belong to you”
“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”
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arifnawaz1 · February 1, 2002, 7:26pm

[quote]
Originally posted by Lamhay:
**woh wardaat bhi karta raha kareenay say
sutoon e daar hi uskay kiye ka hasil tha

main iski zaat per ab aitbaar kiya karti
najanay kitno kay armaan o dil ka qatil tha

**
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Badnaam mere pyar ka afsaana huwa hai...
Deewanay bhi kehtay hain ke deewana huwa hai...!

Lamhay, bahut khoob !

Kya khoob andaaz hai tumhara ay dostoo...
Hamdard ban ke aaye thay kantay chubhoo chalay...!

Qismat ki lakeeroon se tujhe shayad na paa sakein hum...
Isliye hathoon pe likh likh ke tera naam mita detay hain... !

jasmeen · February 1, 2002, 8:29pm

VERYYY NICE LAMHY.
BOHT KHOOB GAZAL HAY…

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lafzoon ko itamad ka lahja bhi chahey
zikrey saher baja hay yaqeeney saher bhi chahaey

Lamhay · February 3, 2002, 5:44pm

thanks akifji, masoom si,mini, pramod, shaam-e-firaq and jasmine!

arifji kia baat hai ap kay shairoon ki

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Khanzada · February 10, 2002, 1:58pm

Beautiful!

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Kambakht Ishq!

Samad · February 10, 2002, 2:22pm

very nice

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