Wo mujj say kehta hay...........

[Swera]

Wo mujj say kehta na udaas huwa karo na hi rora karo
Tum baas hansti muskurati hi raha karo
Main nay socha kintay mushkil kaam karnay ko kehta hay
Ansoo jaab behnay lagain tu unhain rokna bohat mushkil hota hay
Dill jaab udaas ho tu ankhoon main udaasi hood bahood ajati hay
Jaab andar hi udaas ho tu muskuraya kesay jay
Per jaab baat jaab tum say ho tu uaasi ghaib hojati hay
Ansoo rook jatain ahin zara dair ko
Anjeeb sa makhool ho jata hay
Na tu mera naseeb hay, or na hi main tery qabil
Phir bhi sochtain hain tumhian najanay kion
Phir apni sooch per hoodi hansi ajati hay
Hood ko phit hoodi samjana parta hay
Asman or zameen mill nahin saktay
choot lagi tu gehri lagay gi
Or zaham silnay main sadian laag jain gi

By Subha

[Adeel786]

Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay...........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Wo mujj say kehta na udaas huwa karo na hi rora karo
Tum baas hansti muskurati hi raha karo
Main nay socha kintay mushkil kaam karnay ko kehta hay
Ansoo jaab behnay lagain tu unhain rokna bohat mushkil hota hay
Dill jaab udaas ho tu ankhoon main udaasi hood bahood ajati hay
Jaab andar hi udaas ho tu muskuraya kesay jay
Per jaab baat jaab tum say ho tu uaasi ghaib hojati hay
Ansoo rook jatain ahin zara dair ko
Anjeeb sa makhool ho jata hay
Na tu mera naseeb hay, or na hi main tery qabil
Phir bhi sochtain hain tumhian najanay kion
Phir apni sooch per hoodi hansi ajati hay
Hood ko phit hoodi samjana parta hay
Asman or zameen mill nahin saktay
choot lagi tu gehri lagay gi
Or zaham silnay main sadian laag jain gi

By Subha
[/QUOTE]

   wow  swera aap bhee naa so nice , buhat gahre baat kee hey aap ney . hey tum itna achaa likh leitee ho then why not u publish ur book .  
      good luck  smile always on ur face .

[Swera]

Re: Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay...........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Adeel786: *

   wow  swera aap bhee naa so nice , buhat gahre baat kee hey aap ney . hey tum itna achaa likh leitee ho then why not u publish ur book .  
      good luck  smile always on ur face . 

[/QUOTE]

Thnkx for the compleaments Adeel.
baas lik leti, acha hay ya boora is ka fesla ap saab kartain ahin.
Or book.....hm.........us ka pata nahin ab itna acha bhi nahin hay.......

:):)
and u 2 may Allways smile:)

[Adeel786]

Re: Re: Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay...........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *

Thnkx for the compleaments Adeel.
baas lik leti, acha hay ya boora is ka fesla ap saab kartain ahin.
Or book.....hm.........us ka pata nahin ab itna acha bhi nahin hay.......

:):)
and u 2 may Allways smile:)
[/QUOTE]

Ah haan really aap ke sare poetry buhat he nice hotee hey such aap kisee sey bhee poach lein yahan woh aap ko yahee kahey ga keh swera u write so nice cause ur thinking is nice & u r respectable girl.

    Good Luck

[Swera]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay…

*Originally posted by Adeel786: *

Ah haan really aap ke sare poetry buhat he nice hotee hey such aap kisee sey bhee poach lein yahan woh aap ko yahee kahey ga keh swera u write so nice cause ur thinking is nice & u r respectable girl.

    Good Luck 

Thnks Adeel

chalain ji app saab judge baan jao…or feslah karo…

Waiting…

[Adeel786]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay…

*Originally posted by Swera: *

Thnks Adeel

chalain ji app saab judge baan jao…or feslah karo…

Waiting…

  judge  ka order yeh hey keh miss swera ko es sadee ke best shaeira ka khitab diya ja raha hey . aur aap sub ko bhe dawat de ja rahee hey keh aap apney coments dein . 

      good luck swera

[XkanwalX]

real nice man..

[cuteAmir]

Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay...........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Asman or zameen mill nahin saktay
choot lagi tu gehri lagay gi
Or zaham silnay main sadian laag jain gi

By Subha
[/QUOTE]

 yes u r saying right keh zakham silnay main sadian laag jain gi

     Adeel judge saying truth u r no 1 

      keep it up

[WiseGuy]

Nice :k:

[Swera]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay…

*Originally posted by Adeel786: *

  judge  ka order yeh hey keh miss swera ko es sadee ke best shaeira ka khitab diya ja raha hey . aur aap sub ko bhe dawat de ja rahee hey keh aap apney coments dein . 

      good luck swera 

[Swera]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by XkanwalX: *
real nice man..
[/QUOTE]

mujjay kaha kay Adeel ko?

[Swera]

Re: Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay…

*Originally posted by cuteAmir: *

 yes u r saying right keh zakham silnay main sadian laag jain gi

     Adeel judge saying truth u r no 1 

      keep it up 

thnks…

am i?

i’ll…InshaAllah

[Swera]

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Nice :k:

thanks…
u r missing a point here…

[koiDost]

Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay…

*Originally posted by Swera: *
Wo mujj say kehta na udaas huwa karo na hi rora karo
Tum baas hansti muskurati hi raha karo
Main nay socha kintay mushkil kaam karnay ko kehta hay
Ansoo jaab behnay lagain tu unhain rokna bohat mushkil hota hay
Dill jaab udaas ho tu ankhoon main udaasi hood bahood ajati hay
Jaab andar hi udaas ho tu muskuraya kesay jay
Per jaab baat jaab tum say ho tu uaasi ghaib hojati hay
Ansoo rook jatain ahin zara dair ko
Anjeeb sa makhool ho jata hay
Na tu mera naseeb hay, or na hi main tery qabil
Phir bhi sochtain hain tumhian najanay kion
Phir apni sooch per hoodi hansi ajati hay
Hood ko phit hoodi samjana parta hay
Asman or zameen mill nahin saktay
choot lagi tu gehri lagay gi
Or zaham silnay main sadian laag jain gi

By Subha

Rola Diya na

[Amarbail1]

khoob … :k:

[WiseGuy]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *

thanks...........
u r missing a point here.....;)
[/QUOTE]

You are welcmoe!
Am I really, what point??? ;)

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

great:k::k:

[Swera]

Re: Re: Wo mujj say kehta hay…

*Originally posted by koiDost: *

Rola Diya na

o i’m sorry

[Swera]

*Originally posted by Amarbail: *
khoob … :k:

thnkx.

[Swera]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

You are welcmoe!
Am I really, what point??? ;)
[/QUOTE]

:)

Ji really......
u better find out:p