wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal February 1, 2006, 3:07am 1

***agar aansu baha deta tu us k paas kya rahta*** ***wo muj ko honsla deta tu us k paas kya rahta***

***nishaN muj ko nahi milta koi us tak pahochne ka
muje apna pata deta tu us k pass kya raheta

woh Is maan meiN tha K Jis k dum par wo zinda hai
maiN us ka dil dukha deta Tu us k pass kya raheta

musafiR saare phaal kha k apni rah chal dete
shajar tehni Juka deta Tu us k pass kya raheta

meri yaadoN ne he ab Tak usay aabad rakha hai
woh muj ko bhi bhula deta Tu us k pass kya raheta***

Abid February 1, 2006, 5:17am 2

Re: wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

Absolutely fantastic KOYAl...its really bravo...keep it up

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ghazal_kisi_ke February 1, 2006, 5:38am 3

Re: wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

nice

GuL-e-Tasbeeh February 1, 2006, 1:38pm 4

Re: wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

Very nice Koyal:-)

2 good news :-)

nakhan February 1, 2006, 4:05pm 5

Re: wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

Wow bohot khoob koyal...

ullujii February 1, 2006, 11:16pm 6

Re: wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

beautyfull

darwesh February 3, 2006, 2:52am 7

Re: wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

Koyal ji....
Kiya Intikhaab hai...subhanallah !

Amal February 4, 2006, 3:13pm 8

Re: wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

Beautiful ghazal koyal :k:…thanx for sharing

Noor_gr8 February 5, 2006, 5:33pm 9

Re: wo muj ko bhi bhula daita tu us k paas kia raheta

woh mujh ko bhi bhula deta tu us ke paas kia rehta.................wow superb koyal buhat zabardast janab

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