Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 11:06am 1

Jiski aankhen ghazal her ada shair hai
wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Wo haseen zulf shab ka fasana liye
Wo badan naghmaghi wo qaba shair hai

Wo takallum lehakti hui chandni
Wo tabassum mehakta hua shair hai

Phool bhi hain baharen bhi hain geet bhi
Hum nasheen iss gali ki fiza shair hai

Jis se roshan tha dil wo kiran chhin gai
Apne jeene ka aasra ab shair hai

Apne andaaz main baat apni kaho
Meer ka shair to Meer ka shair hai

Main jahaan e adab main akela nahin
Her qadam per mera humnawa shair hai

Arsh per mehsoos khud ko humne kia
Jab kisi ne kaha wah kia shair hai

Ik qayamat hai Jalib ye tanqeed e nau
Jo samajh main na aae wo bada shair hai

waleedhbk February 27, 2012, 11:10am 2

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Shair Jungle ka Raja Hai

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 11:13am 3

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Zardari ko sher kahne ke liye

waleedhbk February 27, 2012, 11:16am 4

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

You mean Pakistan is Jungle

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 11:17am 5

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

I mean Pakistani politics is a jungle

waleedhbk February 27, 2012, 11:19am 6

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Politics idhar bhe

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 11:20am 7

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

PA forums main micro poetry forum ki shandar kamyabi ke baad , aur awaam ki pur zor farmaish per ab mini PA forum in poetry :)

Diva February 27, 2012, 11:31am 8

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

hahahaaaaaaaa …aur rani !!!

Sannan February 27, 2012, 11:44am 9

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Loomari :cobra:

Sannan February 27, 2012, 11:49am 10

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Mujhay song yaad aa gia
tou shaer hay

waleedhbk February 27, 2012, 11:50am 11

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Abhe Mein Rani Dhoodn rha hon

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 12:10pm 12

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Ik qayamat hai Jalib ye tanqeed e nau
Jo samajh main na aae wo bada shair hai

Sher ko vote den.. kiyunke wo bada sher hai

UZ February 27, 2012, 3:17pm 13

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

haan yehi sahi baat hai jo samjh nahi aaye woh hi lion hai

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 3:28pm 14

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Ab koi ghazal ke ooper bhi comments hojen :(

UZ February 27, 2012, 3:30pm 15

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

aap logo nay khud hi mazaaq banaya warna mein to usually nahi kerti ;)

Diva February 27, 2012, 3:31pm 16

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pehla shair aap kis ki nazar kerna pasand fermaein gay??!?!

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 3:40pm 17

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

No problem. I was just saying, itni badi ghazal likhi maine (no copy paste), mujhe to boht achi lagi.

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 3:41pm 18

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Wo jiski ghazali aankhen meri rooh tak jhaank saken

UZ February 27, 2012, 4:26pm 19

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

Yeh ghazal aap ney khud likhi hai to bohat hi nice hai :k:

muqawwee123 February 27, 2012, 4:57pm 20

Re: Wo meri shaairi hai mera shair hai

waise maine apni salhiyaton pe kabhi ghuroor nahin kia, lekin ye Habib Jalib ne likhi hai