wo meri baat pe cho'nka magar kuch nahi bola

[Koyal]

***maiN kahti thei k aa'nkhooN se tumhaiN awaaz daiti hooN wo bola haN mujhay aa'nso bikhrnay ki koi awaaz ati hia

maiN kahti thei terey maathay pa dua’eiN likhti rahti hooN
wo bola haaN mujhay saa’nsaiN teri mehsoos hoti haiN

maiN kahti thei suno sahiR mujhay tum se mohabat hai
wo bola jaaN lay lay ghi lgaa’oo maiN jo shidat hai

maiN kahti thei chalo katib se kah k maangh looN tum ko
wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

maiN kahti thei dareechoon per hawa ko kab bulaa’o gaye
wo bola jis lamhay umeed ki shamaiN jala’ooN gha

maiN kahti thei maiN shab bhar chaand k hamrah chalti hooN
wo bolaa raat bhar taaray tabhi jalteyhaiN bhujtey haiN

to be continued

***

[K_Khan]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

maiN kahti thei maiN shab bhar chaand k hamrah chalti hooN
wo bolaa raat bhar loomard bhi bara aah-o-zaar karTai haiN

on a serious note:- Nice sharing koko..

[Starlight]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho'nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Koyal

***maiN kahti thei chalo katib se kah k maangh looN tum ko*** ***wo meri baat pe cho'nka magar kuch nahi bola***

os ko katib ka meaning nahi pata hona.

[Sheal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

bohot khoob koyal :k:
is ka baqi part bhi jaldi say post kero

[Koyal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Sheal

bohot khoob koyal :k:
is ka baqi part bhi jaldi say post kero

aj he kar day kia? bohat lambi hia 3 hisay maiN ho ghi

[Aryaan]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho'nka magar kuch nahi bola

Bohat khoob Koyal... Baaqi dono hisson ka intezaar rahe ga..:)

[Ali_2]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

aik hi dafa post kiya karo

inteha ho gai intezar ki
aai na kuch khabar baqi poem ki

PS. Nice :k:

waiting for the rest

[Koyal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Kamran-Khan

maiN kahti thei maiN shab bhar chaand k hamrah chalti hooN
wo bolaa raat bhar loomard bhi bara aah-o-zaar karTai haiN

on a serious note:- Nice sharing koko..

ye koi joke section tu nahi why ap laughing

[Koyal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Ali

aik hi dafa post kiya karo

inteha ho gai intezar ki
aai na kuch khabar baqi poem ki

PS. Nice :k:

waiting for the rest

bohat lambi hia hath dukh agye they na

pd: thanks anghotha dekhnay ka

[Koyal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho'nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Aryaan

Bohat khoob Koyal... Baaqi dono hisson ka intezaar rahe ga..:)

shukria Aryaan jaldi post karey ghi :)

[K_Khan]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Koyal

ye koi joke section tu nahi why ap laughing

shair dubara parho.. MERE post mai.. :halo:

[Koyal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Kamran-Khan

shair dubara parho.. MERE post mai.. :halo:

tu ye loomar koN hai :halo:

[K_Khan]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Koyal

tu ye loomar koN hai :halo:

wo jo kal raat bhar shoor machata rhaa..

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

aww bohat khoob :k:

[Prince_Ali]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

nice sharing koyal jee :k:

[Koyal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Prince_Ali

nice sharing koyal jee :k:

[Koyal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Kamran-Khan

wo jo kal raat bhar shoor machata rhaa..

koN?

[Koyal]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Shab-e-Hijar

aww bohat khoob :k:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

@Koyal

* wo bola jaaN lay lay ghi** lgaa'oo **maiN jo shidat hai*******

I don’t understand this word. help!

@Koyal

*** to be continued
***

please finish.

[tum_bin_1]

Re: wo meri baat pe cho’nka magar kuch nahi bola

This is really a master piece by By " Kanwal Shahab Ahmed",
the more u read it the more u fall in love with it
a bit long , but it is worth reading
Amazingly written
simply GREAT :k: