wo lufz lufz muj maiN utarta raha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal September 10, 2006, 7:00pm 1

***hoontoN pe sahilooN ki tarha tash'naghi rahi*** ***maiN chup huwa tu meri aana cheekhti rahi***

aik naam kia likha tha sahil ki ray’et per
phir umer bhar hawa se meri dushmani rahi

sarkooN pe sard raat rehi meri hamsafar
aankhooN maiN meray sath thakan jagti rari

yaadooN se khelti rahi tanha’ee raat bhar
khushbuu k intzaar maiN shab bheegti rahi

wo lufz lufz muj maiN utarta raha “shakeel”
sochooN pe us k naam ki takhti lagi rahi

ullujii September 10, 2006, 10:30pm 2

Re: wo lufz lufz muj maiN utarta raha

beautyfull :)

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Koyal September 11, 2006, 1:31am 3

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IS September 11, 2006, 4:54am 4

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Very Nice :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR September 11, 2006, 5:52am 5

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Boht khoob koyal jii :)

mahamkhan September 11, 2006, 6:35am 6

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Nice one :)

Prince_Ali September 11, 2006, 2:46pm 7

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very nice :k:

Bholay_Bisray September 11, 2006, 5:49pm 8

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very nice Koyal! , apni turha ki cheesain U post :)

fara September 11, 2006, 8:52pm 9

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**Koyal Ji..

You have a classic taste and i would appreciate if u post more often.

Shukran

Fara
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ullujii September 12, 2006, 5:26pm 10

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zayda blush blush na hon..your poem is beautyfull NOT U

Zamil September 12, 2006, 9:22pm 11

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As usual........
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Beautiful :)