wo kya karaiN ke jinhaiN intezaar karna hai

Koyal · November 1, 2003, 11:18am

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kisi ki aankh meiN khud ko talaash karna hai
phir is k baad hamain aaey’noo say darna hai

falak ki band gali ke faqeer hain ye taaray
k ghoom phir k yaheen se inhaiN guzarna hai

jo zindagi thee meri jaaN terey saath gaa’ee
bas ab tu umer k naqshay meiN waqt bharna hai

jo tum chalo tu abhi do qadam meiN kat jaayay
jo faasila mujhe saade’ooN mein paar karna hai

tu kyoN na aaj yaheeN per qayyaam ho jaayay
k shab qareeb hai aakhir kaheeN theharna hai

sehar huwi tu sitarooN ne moond lee ankhaiN
wo kya karaiN ke jinhaiN intezaar karna hai*

Daagh · November 1, 2003, 11:22am

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very beautiful…

last sher is just wonderful…

ek sher …

subah ne sej se uth te hue li angrai
o saba tu bhi jo aai to akele aai

chand_chehra · November 1, 2003, 12:33pm

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very nice :k:

WiseGuy · November 1, 2003, 1:57pm

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

kisi ki aankh meiN khud ko talaash karna hai
phir is k baad hamain aaey'noo say darna hai

jo tum chalo tu abhi do qadam meiN kat jaayay
jo faasila mujhe saade'ooN mein paar karna hai

[/QUOTE]

Hum ko bohat acha laga aap ka intekhaab.
Thanks :)

Capricorn · November 1, 2003, 2:10pm

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Beautiful :k:

Philanthrope · November 1, 2003, 2:16pm

Wah!

HeArT_HaCKeR · November 1, 2003, 2:41pm

beautiful

ullujii · November 1, 2003, 5:08pm

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wonderfull :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · November 1, 2003, 7:20pm

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bhut khoob:k:

Koyal · November 2, 2003, 1:10am

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ab saba sab ko kesay sath main utha lati ..

Koyal · November 2, 2003, 1:13am

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Amal · November 2, 2003, 11:37am

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Lovely stuff Koyal:k:…thanx for sharing:)

cuteepie · November 2, 2003, 1:35pm

beautiful

Koyal · November 2, 2003, 3:45pm

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THankZ…

Koyal · November 2, 2003, 3:46pm

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bohat thankz..

Koyal · November 2, 2003, 3:47pm

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Hum ko bohat acha laga aap ka intekhaab.
Thanks :)
[/QUOTE]

hamin be bohat acha laga ap ka yahaN ana..:)

Koyal · November 2, 2003, 3:51pm

thanks phila...Hh..cutiee...:)

Koyal · November 2, 2003, 3:52pm

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who?

Koyal · November 2, 2003, 3:53pm

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koN?

ullujii · November 2, 2003, 4:44pm

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VO poem