judai ne usse dekha sar-e-baam]
dareechey par shafaq k rang barsey
main iss deewar par charh to gaya thaa
utaarey kaun ab deewar par se
gila hai eik gali se shahar-e-dil ki
main larta phir raha hooN shaher bhar se
use dekhe zamaney bhar ka ye chand
humari chaandni saaye ko tarsey
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
Nice one!
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
gud sharing koyal
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
gila hai ik gali se shahar-e-dil ki main larta phir raha hooN shaher bhar se
This is the correct misra;
"Wo khushbu lauT aaee hai safar se"
(aj izaafi hai)
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
gila hai eik gali se shahar-e-dil ki main larta phir raha hooN shaher bhar se
use dekhe zamaney bhar ka ye chand humari chaandni saaye ko tarsey
wow nice one:)
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
use dekhe zamaney bhar ka ye chand
humari chaandni saaye ko tarsey
*wah ge wahh *
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
g I know zamil thanks 4 correction but ye “AJ” kisi waja se use kia tha:blush:
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
Ye **Uno **key liye likhi hay aap nay :p
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
Lol @ UNO (you mean United Nations) woh tu khud becharay haiN.
PS: Bohat kh00b Koyal thank you for sharing.
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
koyal and Wise guy … you both have time for gupshup but not for me :crying3:
PS
nice ghazal 
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
PS: Bohat kh00b Koyal thank you for sharing.
ap ko kesay pata becharey xperince bolta hai :p
ya and u know UNO is working with us :p
ps: thanks
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
shabo u are looking time 4 us but u dun have time to com GS at least we can talk over 
me mishhhhhhhh U …will call U soon
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
g:blush: kia karey ab wo UNO jo huwey 
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
Koyal saheba chai hui heiN, hasb-e-maamool :)
Re: wo khushbu laut aayi hai aj safar se
oh tu ap be yahan aiey huwey haiN hasb-e-mamool :D