Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa...

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa...

Amal, once again, zabaradast effort!! my goodness..when are you going to publish your book? and yes I am serious

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa...

Thanx a lot ** KoiDost, Aryaan, reet, Paglee, Jias** and ghazal kisi ke :)

Mindless, nice to see you after such a long time :) Hope you are fine. Book bhi publish ho jaey gi, aap apni copy advance meiN book karwa lo :) Stay around :)

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa...

^ Amal yes I am fine Alhamdolillah, and I know you are fine too :) meri copy to book honi hi chahye waisay bhi, I dont think I need to remind you right? :) but aapki book ka koi bharosa nahi, pata nahi publish hogi bhi ya nahi..therefore I am going to note down all of your poetry, you're such a born poet Amal :)

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa…

It’s definitely not coming so you better write down whatever you get hands on :~) And to save you another question, book is out of question until I come to feel that my work is worth reading twice :slight_smile:

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa…

Really but hamin tu aik he dafa parany se hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm:)

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa…

buhat pyari ghazal he Amal ji :~)

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa...

Amal Very Nice written and also there is no Comparison between one poet to another I am sure he/she whomever it is may have the same life style as you do no one is great or the best we all are in the same boat it is just that this person has published it and you didn't.

Dil main jo baat utar jaaye nazar ke rastey
us ke kaatib ko kisi aur se targee kia dain

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa…

jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
:k:

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa...

Welcome back..Amal Bhai...
hamesha kii tarah bahot achhi ghazal le kar aaye haiN aap..maza aa gaya paDh kar...
yun to ab main mahfil meiN kam hii aata hooN..ab aap aa gaye ho to aataa rahoonga shaayad...

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece....

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa…

I know aap ko aek dafa bhi hazm nahi hoti, do dafa kya ho gi :frowning: … hum nahi chaaptey koi book-shuk :frowning:


Rameesha ji ghazal pasand karney ke leeye be’had shukriya :slight_smile:

NikamiJi, shukar hey aek, aadh line aap ko pasand aa gai, agar hum ney ye line bhi na likhi hoti to hum aap ke angootthey sey mehroom reh jaatey :frowning: By the way, tashreef-aawari ke leeye shukriya. And really nice to see you back :slight_smile:

DADDU ghazal pasand karne ke leeye shukriya. Aap ney sahi kaha, har kisi ki aek apni jaga hoti hey.

Pramod bhara shukar hey aap aa gaey. Barey arsey baad mulaaqaat ho rahi hey aap sey. Bohat arsa ho gaya kuch suna, sunaaya nahi :slight_smile: Ab hum aa gaey heiN to aap bhi aa jao, kuch waqt nikaalo aur ho jaey koi taaza kalaam. We will be waiting :slight_smile:

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa...

gr8 brother shabash ;)

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa…

Amal jesay khamoshi ki zuban hoti hia jo shaa’er log samj laitey ho sakta hia NIkami sahiba k anghoothya ki be koi zubaan :wink:

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa…

aisa kahnay se ap ki jaan nahi bachanay wali book se wesay tu koyal k leay ap thora he chupwa rahya …agar chupwain gain be tu apnay :hoonh: :snooty:

Re: Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa…

nahi kuch khabar ke kis gharri terey raastoN ka sira miley
terey naqsh-e-pa ki talaash meiN lagi to hey meri justuju

its just wow, amazing…
aik aik sher tareef kay qabil hay :slight_smile: bohot aa’la
thnx for posting up here, keep up the good work :k: