wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN

NikamiJano · July 16, 2003, 3:11am

* meiN us ki sookhi hui aaNkhooN pe kya yaqeeN kaRta **meiN ne thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikheY heiN**

pat’tey toot’tey heiN to shaakoN ko khooN rulaatey heiN
tum ne khizaaN meiN kabhi ghor se shajar deikhey heiN

meiN ne na thakneY ka sabaq seekha hey parindoN seY
wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safaR deikheY heiN*

Zakhmi_Umar · July 16, 2003, 5:00am

Re: wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN

khoooob :k: thanks for sharing nice one

Capricorn · July 16, 2003, 5:00am

Re: wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN

Wah, kia baat hai nikii :k:

amirbilal · July 16, 2003, 5:50am

very nice

Amarbail1 · July 16, 2003, 6:23am

Bahut aa’laa…:k:
Nice to see you back …

Capricorn · July 16, 2003, 11:15am

Kaheen gayeen thee yeh kia? :halo:

WiseGuy · July 16, 2003, 12:12pm

Re: wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN

:k: Bohat khoob Jano ji…
Thanks for sharing…

Lekin aankhaiN sookhi kahan haiN, baqol shair…

Lutf agar barsaat ka chaho
Tu in aankhoN maiN aa baitho
Woh baras maiN barasti haiN
Yeh barso say barasti haiN

Pramod · July 16, 2003, 12:56pm

bahot hii achhe ashar haiN, bahna. Why didn't you post the whole ghazal ? shaayad maine padha hai pahle bhii magar phir bhii bahot achha laga..

thanks for sharing.....

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 16, 2003, 1:06pm

:-)

Kyaa Aap nay bhii thehray huwey paani meiN bhanwar dekh liyay :~)

Amal · July 16, 2003, 4:16pm

It’s nice to see you in action NikamiJi:k:…keep posting:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 16, 2003, 4:36pm

bohat khoob nikami

:k:

Muslim_Queen · July 16, 2003, 4:50pm

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meiN us ki sookhi hui aaNkhooN pe kya yaqeeN kaRta
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very nice :) .

chodhry · July 16, 2003, 6:11pm

bohat achey Ishar hein... especially the last one. i really liked it. keep it up.

chand_chehra · July 16, 2003, 9:55pm

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bohat khoob :k:

Black_Mamba · July 17, 2003, 5:28am

:k:

NikamiJano · July 17, 2003, 10:49am

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lagta hia aj kla ap k Ny main kafi barsataiN ho rehi hian thanks for liking..

NikamiJano · July 17, 2003, 10:51am

Thanks BM....chodhry sahib...MQ...hH...amilbilal..bail sis...ZU.....thanks u all :)

NikamiJano · July 17, 2003, 10:52am

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thanks chando g kahan hoti hain ap aj kal ya phir nikami he lagta hia ghum ho gaye hia

NikamiJano · July 17, 2003, 10:53am

hmmm ** bhi ** kia ap ne be …

NikamiJano · July 17, 2003, 10:55am

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *
bahot hii achhe ashar haiN, bahna. Why didn't you post the whole ghazal ? shaayad maine padha hai pahle bhii magar phir bhii bahot achha laga..

thanks for sharing.....
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thanks Pra g zaror parhi ho ghi ap ne ye gazal pahlay be barey mashhoor shaier ki hia bus us waqat itnay he sher achay lagya likh dalay...shairi parnay k leay be mood ki zarorat hoti hai na Pra g :)