wo dono kiyun nahi attey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Samander poochta hai ab wo dono kiyun nahi attey
wohi donno jo bhegi reet per
ek dosarey ka haath thammay duur taak
kabhi hansttey,kabhi kuch gungunattey
ya kabhi chup chap bhittey duur ufaq ki goodh may
ropposh honay walla sooraj dekhttey
ansoo bhahattey loat jattey!
Samander poochta hai ab wo donno kiyu nahi attey
jo attey thay to apnay saath kitnay khwab lattey thay
kabhi sahi say dehairoo seepiyaa chunttey thay
nangay paoo pani may challey attey thay
bhegi reet say nannay gharondhay bhi banattey thay
aur unmay seepiya,rangeen say kuch sangreezay yu sajattey thay
kay jaisay aj kay jugnoosay lamhay
anay walley kal ki moothhi may chupattey thay!
Samander poochta hai ab wo donno kiyu nahi attey
mager samander nay khiza ki siskiya laiti hoee
ek shaam ko wo nojawanno ko nahi dekha
jo dair taak tanha sarey sahil raha bhaitta
phir ussnay dair sarey khaat
buhut say phool sookay aur tasveeray
aur apnay akhri ansoo
samander kay hawalley kerdiyey..

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Re: wo dono kiyun nahi attey

Wonderful piece …:k:

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that is very noce

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thats good

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good one...

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Nice :flower1:

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v.good

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Beautiful...

wo dono koyoon nahi atay...

thanks for sharing

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excellent job:k::k:
thanks for sharing:flower1:

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:k:

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good

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Very nice.....

aap say samandar poochta hai hum un say poochtay hain....

Hijar main khoon rulatay hoo kahan hootay hoo
Loot kar koyoon nahi atay hoo kaha hootay hoo

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Re: wo dono kiyun nahi attey

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by waseemzks: *
Samander poochta hai ab wo dono kiyun nahi attey
wohi donno jo bhegi reet per
ek dosarey ka haath thammay duur taak
kabhi hansttey,kabhi kuch gungunattey
ya kabhi chup chap bhittey duur ufaq ki goodh may
ropposh honay walla sooraj dekhttey
ansoo bhahattey loat jattey!
Samander poochta hai ab wo donno kiyu nahi attey
jo attey thay to apnay saath kitnay khwab lattey thay
kabhi sahi say dehairoo seepiyaa chunttey thay
nangay paoo pani may challey attey thay
bhegi reet say nannay gharondhay bhi banattey thay
aur unmay seepiya,rangeen say kuch sangreezay yu sajattey thay
kay jaisay aj kay jugnoosay lamhay
anay walley kal ki moothhi may chupattey thay!
Samander poochta hai ab wo donno kiyu nahi attey
mager samander nay khiza ki siskiya laiti hoee
ek shaam ko wo nojawanno ko nahi dekha
jo dair taak tanha sarey sahil raha bhaitta
phir ussnay dair sarey khaat
buhut say phool sookay aur tasveeray
aur apnay akhri ansoo
samander kay hawalley kerdiyey..
[/QUOTE]

hey waseem what a nice poetry yaar sub khuch samander ko dey gaya woh kiya karta woh bhee apna sub khuch deina para ous ko jo buhat he mushkil ho ga ous key liyee leiken aisa kerna para coz wohe kisee aur ke ho gaee ho gee i know .

   thanx 4 sharing
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Nice ....

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bouhat khoob....