wo chup se chalti rahti thei maiN soochaiN likhta rehta tha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal April 21, 2008, 5:47am 1

***wo khushbo bhaja karti thei maiN nazmaiN likhta rahta tha*** ***wo hans k ujaa'la karti thei maiN subhaiN likhta rehta tha***

geeli raai’et pe sahil ki doobtey suraj k hum’raah
wo chup se chalti rahti thei maiN soochaiN likhta rehta tha

deep wafaa k hotey they ya shaa’ed do taa’ray they
wo muj ko dekha karti thei maiN ankhaiN likhta rehta tha

tap’ti dhoop ka rang bhi tu phoolooN sa ho jaa’ta tha
wo zulfaiN khola karti thei maiN shaa’maiN likhta rehta tha

toot kar aksar chaa’hat maiN rooth k yuunhi ulfat maiN
wo muj ko jeeta karti thei maiN maa’taiN likhta rehta tha

donoo ki pahli chaa’hat thei donoo toot k miltey thay
wo waday karti rahti thei maiN kasmaiN likhta rehta tha

channd diN jab aa thahray they uski meri judaa’ee maiN
maiN us k haath maiN pahrooN phir lakee’raiN likhta rehta tha

jaa’N se payaray se shikwa khud ko ruswa karna tha
maiN apnay hontooN pe chup ki bus muhraiN likhta rehta tha

dil ki hasrat asi thei dil maiN jo rah jaa’ti thei
jo us se kah nahi paata tha wo bataiN likhta rehta tha

diN maiN dard ki shidat ko hans k maiN sah jaa’ta tha
per biN us k jo kat ti thein maiN raa’taiN likhta rehta tha

goodnews April 21, 2008, 8:24am 2

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Khub:k:

Ludo carom etc

muddii April 21, 2008, 8:42am 3

Re: wo chup se chalti rahti thei maiN soochaiN likhta rehta tha

Great like ever:)

bheegiyaad April 21, 2008, 9:56am 4

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very nice :k:

S.786 April 21, 2008, 12:00pm 5

Re: wo chup se chalti rahti thei maiN soochaiN likhta rehta tha

very good

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being_lonely April 21, 2008, 12:55pm 6

Re: wo chup se chalti rahti thei maiN soochaiN likhta rehta tha

Like it kuku jee bohat umda

woh kiya hai (pakistani horror show)

abeeha April 21, 2008, 1:08pm 7

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wow koyal very nice :k:

Shab-e-Hijar April 21, 2008, 8:57pm 8

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aww kitnay pagal thay dono
wasy very nice :k:

Aryaan April 21, 2008, 9:59pm 9

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Beautiful Sharing Koyal..:k:

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Jhanjharewali April 22, 2008, 2:50am 10

Re: wo chup se chalti rahti thei maiN soochaiN likhta rehta tha

Koko, tumhare intekhaab padh ke mei kashmakash mei pad jaati huun ke kameyaab ishq zyada khoobsorat hei ya nakameyaab ishq :hinna:

Koyal April 22, 2008, 4:01am 11

Re: wo chup se chalti rahti thei maiN soochaiN likhta rehta tha

ab me kia kahay k nkamyaab ishq karen ya kamyaab
aisa koi tajurba hota tu bata daiti

Koyal April 22, 2008, 4:02am 12

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thanks Aryaan

deadsoul April 22, 2008, 10:28am 13

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buhat umdaaa

Shumaisa April 22, 2008, 1:16pm 14

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wah Bohat Zabardasstt.. :k:

Koyal April 23, 2008, 3:00am 15

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thanks shumi

mama_ki_dua April 23, 2008, 3:09am 16

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very nice :)

Sheal April 23, 2008, 3:51pm 17

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bohot umda sharing hai.

Koyal April 25, 2008, 3:23am 18

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thanks sheal :)

redidentity April 25, 2008, 6:26am 19

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buhat khoob..

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