wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga'ey

NikamiJano · January 22, 2003, 1:45am

ye zameeN soO’ee thei neend maiN yahaN la k muj ko basa gaye
wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga’ey

kisi raat baRaf ki oO’at se naye aAg lay k wo aa’eN gaiN
agaR aj dhoop ki goad maiN wo gulaab apnaY sula ga’ey

ka’ee log aAg k phool hain zara dooR hoN tu chamaN chamaN
jahaN muskuRa k galaY lagaY dil-o-jaaN maiN aAg laga ga’ey

ye hansi be koi niQaab hai jahaN chaha hum ne giRaa lee’aa
kabi us ka dard chupaa ga’ey kabhi apna daRd chupa ga’ey

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 22, 2003, 1:52am

wah nikami jee:)
kia baat hai apke:k::k::k:

chand_chehra · January 22, 2003, 3:28am

Re: wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga’ey

beautiful :k:

WiseGuy · January 22, 2003, 6:10am

Re: wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga'ey

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

ye zameeN soO'ee thei neend maiN yahaN la k muj ko basa gaye
wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga'ey

kisi raat baRaf ki oO'at se naye aAg lay k wo aa'eN gaiN
agaR aj dhoop ki goad maiN wo gulaab apnaY sula ga'ey

ka'ee log aAg k phool hain zara dooR hoN tu chamaN chamaN
jahaN muskuRa k galaY lagaY dil-o-jaaN maiN aAg laga ga'ey

ye hansi be koi niQaab hai jahaN chaha hum ne giRaa lee'aa
kabi us ka dard chupaa ga'ey kabhi apna daRd chupa ga'ey
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Bohat khoob JANO eik eik shair bohat LaJawaab hai
Thanks for sharing :) :) :) :)

Ocean_Of_Love · January 22, 2003, 9:55am

very nice:k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 22, 2003, 1:09pm

Re: wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga’ey

nikamijeee kis ke bat kerih ap:):k::k:

hanie · January 22, 2003, 2:12pm

very nice nikammi... :)

XkanwalX · January 22, 2003, 2:45pm

wah...

Lamhay · January 22, 2003, 3:26pm

Nikami u got a wonderful choice !!

Eastern_Thoughts · January 22, 2003, 8:20pm

:D
yeh thori mushkil poetry nahi hay? ayk murtaba purhnay say sumagh hi nahi aai ;)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 23, 2003, 12:22pm

Very Nice NJ sis:-(

nikii · January 23, 2003, 5:47pm

Re: wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga’ey

bhut khooob :k: :k:

NikamiJano · January 23, 2003, 9:12pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *
:D
yeh thori mushkil poetry nahi hay? ayk murtaba purhnay say sumagh hi nahi aai ;)
[/QUOTE]

waqie bohat mushkil lagi ap ko..zara ghor se parhin tu itni asan hia na ET..zara IT se bahar a k parho na ap ..:)

_Passionate · January 23, 2003, 9:39pm

bohat khoob nikami jii…its wondefulll:flower1:..thanx for sharingg..

NikamiJano · January 23, 2003, 9:42pm

thanks KK..:)zara nawazi hai ap ki

NikamiJano · January 23, 2003, 11:30pm

Thanks passion...nikii sis..Gul-e-tea..lamhay sis..XKX..."Honey"...and chando g sab ka VV thanks....:)

NikamiJano · January 23, 2003, 11:31pm

Re: Re: wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga’ey

mashoom g apni baat kaar rehey hain hum…

NikamiJano · January 23, 2003, 11:32pm

thanks and welcome here lots of love …

NikamiJano · January 23, 2003, 11:34pm

Re: Re: wo chamakti dhoop ki shaal peR meRay dil k phool saja ga'ey

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Bohat khoob JANO eik eik shair bohat LaJawaab hai
Thanks for sharing :) :) :) :)
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JANO ki tarha ;)