wo chala gayaa mujhe chhoD ke.....

Maheen2002 · June 30, 2003, 3:48pm

zabardast :k:

ShaRaRa · June 30, 2003, 3:52pm

beautiful:flower1:

Lamhay · June 30, 2003, 3:53pm

zabardast!

Pramod · July 1, 2003, 3:35pm

Thanks for appriciation
Maheen,ShaRaRa and Lamhey...

ASA · July 2, 2003, 2:08pm

wah jee wah... bouhat hee khoob...

Pramod · July 2, 2003, 4:49pm

It is so nice of you AsA for liking my creation....

Sehar · July 2, 2003, 4:54pm

Pramod

Bahut achi ghazal hai

Nadia_H · July 9, 2003, 6:00am

wow…really beautiful Masha’Allah.

Thank you for sharing.

Pramod · July 9, 2003, 1:32pm

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Sehar aur Nadia .

cuteepie · July 9, 2003, 4:08pm

buhet khoob :k:

Capricorn · July 9, 2003, 5:10pm

Re: wo chala gayaa mujhe chhoD ke.....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
ye kisi ka asar e dua hii tha, jo tu mil gaya sar e raah mujhe
mujhe etna mila tere ishq meiN, kabhee haath phir uTha na saka

wo munsif hi nahin mera yaar bhii hai, mujhe oos pe aitbaar bhii hai
par wo sazaa suna ke chalaa gaya, aur mera zurm bhii bataa na saka

mujhe oos ne etne zakhm diye, meri rooh bhii rahti hai Thakii huee
maine laakh koshisheN kar lii magar, apnii nazar se oose gira na saka

By Pramod
[/QUOTE]

I am impressed Pramod. I love your thoughtful poetic wanderings!

Pramod · July 9, 2003, 7:51pm

Re: Re: wo chala gayaa mujhe chhoD ke.....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

I am impressed Pramod. I love your thoughtful poetic wanderings!
[/QUOTE]

bahot bahot shukriya Capricorn . ye lafz bahot door tak es field meiN meri rahbaree karenge...
thanks once again....

Capricorn · July 11, 2003, 7:45pm

Re: Re: Re: wo chala gayaa mujhe chhoD ke.....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

bahot bahot shukriya Capricorn . ye lafz bahot door tak es field meiN meri rahbaree karenge...
thanks once again....
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Pramod, aap ke yeh alffaaz to mere liye aik aizaaz thehre.......Thanks to you my dear for feeling my appreciations which I infact give out of my heart:)

Khanzada · July 20, 2003, 5:04pm

bauhat khoob pramod mian… :k: best kaam kar dia aap ne.

Pramod · July 21, 2003, 12:21am

aap kii zaraa navaazi hai Khanzada sahab…shukriya…

Tauseef · July 26, 2003, 8:34pm

Zabardast hay.

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 27, 2003, 4:26pm

beautiful :k:

Gemini_the_Great · July 28, 2003, 3:19am

Re: wo chala gayaa mujhe chhoD ke…

beautiful :k:

Pramod · July 28, 2003, 3:05pm

ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya
*Tauseef,HeArT HaCKeR sahiba and Gemini the Great *.

abc1234 · March 17, 2004, 6:47am

na maiN hii mar gayaa dard se, oos ko bhii kabhee bhula na saka…

aap ki is ghazal pe shairi KHATAM hae Pramod ji :k:

a truly beautiful piece of work :k: best of luck for your future efforts…very very well done :k: